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[hide message]Jason struggles to live in this new and strange world with the weight of a war on his back. Through adventure and strife he'll strive to uncover the secrets of magic and the Alicorn Gods while secretly searching for a way to bring Humanity back.
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I am intrigued. go on.
Well i am waiting do more....
Love how Celestias bias was also included in her discription of them
I broke my computer on this story. Not in the good way.
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There are few spelling and grammar errors, but besides that- She committed Genocide on the human race, his race. And all he does is sit there. At that point, I would've A.) Killed Myself, or B.) Attempted to strangle Celestia. Then and there.
This story is good, but could do without the human basically saying "Oh, looky there! She killed my entire race... and what's that? She's asking for us to be friends!? Sure! HAPPINESS! YAY!
My unofficial rating: 6/10
(I just rate stuff for fun. Ignore the rating thing above if you want to.)
Keep in mind that this is not ment' to be mean, it is supposed to be constructive criticism.
I'm starting to see similarities between your story and mine...
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I myself was bit confused with the time setting, the backstory and the so called present day...if it was really 4045AD when the Alicorn/Human War began then Humans would be so far advanced that colonisation of other planets would be the latest trend and the human weaponry would be next gen like plasma and lasers...even gauss cannons at the least. Everything would be so updated that all the humans needed to do was pull back into space drop a medium lived bio weapon that humans are immune to and alicorns are not and just sit back and do nothing untill the Alicorns were wiped out and reclaim the planet while the bio weapon destroys itself.
So he gets his raced wiped out finds out who did it by there own admition and he has no ill will. if it were me I would be trying to get revenge
6026930 We do not know if he has no I'll will yet, just that he's confused, and has a grievously low amount of intelligence on the creatures around him. Any combatant worth their salt waits to enter combat until there is enough intelligence on the target(s).
6026930 If it were me, at first I would be pissed off beyond belief, but hide it very well. Then I would ask, in what would be a chillingly calm voice to her, to be let outside to the Everfree Forest, where I would then proceed to find every Timberwolf and cut it woodchips while screaming in a blind rage, most likely scaring the other ponies out of their minds, before finally breaking down and sobbing my heart out.
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Yeah but thats a normal human reaction. When do fanfic writers ever do normal?
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either a bio weapon or a laser using the energy of the sun itself to wipe out the biosphere of earth altogether. because at that point in time not only would we have colonized other planets in our solar system. we would have spread to a good portion of the galaxy. as soon as the biosphere is destroyed we could re terraform the planet back to what it was and find out where those damn winged unicorns came from.
this man, SHOULD BE FUCKING INFURIATED!!!!!! AND IT DOESN'T EVEN TELL WHY THEY FOUGHT, THE PONIES WANTED TO WIPE OUT A FUCKING MEMORIAL, AND THEY WIPED OUT AN ENTIRE SPECIES, THEY ARE THE MONSTERS, THE MURDERERS, THE XENOPHOBIC FUCKERS, I AM RAGE INCARNATE, I AM THE PINNACLE OF HATRED, I AM THE LORD OF PAIN, I AM THE BEING WHO MAKES THE DEVIL WEEP IN MADNESS, I AM THE ONE WHO MAKES ANGELS FLEE IN TERROR, AND I WOULD DROWN CELESTIA IN THE BLOOD ON HER HOOVES, AND LEAVE HER AT THE MERCY OF THE ENTIRE HUMAN RACE, she thinks she knows the meaning of vengeance, I, AM VENGEANCE!!!!!!
I'm calm now.
Khorne: I'm actaully scared.😨😨😨😨
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okay, first, cringe. second, that was a flashback, she likely just told him that they were in a war that wiped out humanity as a whole.
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Pffft. Normal human reaction?
If I found out my country lost a war and everyone died from the weapon, I'd do my best to hunker down and avoid attracting the ire of such a powerful enemy. Especially if it was some 6000 years in the future version of my country or something where my parents and friends wouldn't exist any more anyways.
Claiming you would be so outraged that you'd go 'meta by the way' slaughter packs of timber wolves is the actual inhuman reaction here.