I want to see more Humans kicking ass. Perhaps Celestia becomes arrogant again and one of the Eternal Men puts her in her place.

Great, as usual. Can't wait for the start of Act III.

8125841 I've noticed, you ask this question a lot... So, I have to ask, how do you feel about stories with sex in them?

How many acts will this story have?

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I'm making this up as I go along, m8

So good can't wait for more.

... he just ate a soul. Isn't that a thing evil overlords do?

8156002 Or he is an Undead akin to the Souls games.

it s'good

8160601 You're a monster, I love it!

Love this story keep it up.

I stayed up till 1:00am re-reading this story its awesome great work I'm gonna sleep now zzzz

8202357 Going into a psychotic murder rage is in no way a normal reaction.

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They aren't anthro whatsoever.

“Jason, you have just consumed the soul of a god,” Luna said. “You were flushed with magic, and your body reacted. You experienced a rejection, something very unique to magical humans as you know, and it is a wonder that you did not succumb.”

JASON, THE ETERNAL MAN OF HOPE, OR HUMANITY, MAYBE PEACE(?), CALLING IT!!!!!!!!

“The cruelty hit me then, and it hit my sister too, that these people, so alike us yet missing just that one piece to bring them to what they considered divinity, it was the Unaligned Alicorns that named us gods, do you understand? They built temples and statues in our names, we were everything to them... They were so obsessed by our powers , that they would throw themselves into the death machine of Humanity because we declared them demons.”

were the demons humanity or the Unaligned?

I could have gone the entire story thinking nemisis was an asshole. But nope you had to add the scene with his lover during battle. Damnit I really feel sorry for him now, he doesn't seem like a complete ass now.

Anyway just picked this up Thursday, I've loved seeing this get serious as it went. Still got chapters to read though so back to it.

Poor Jason got so shit going on doesn't he?

This story is AWESOME!!!

He is Alicornborn