Real quick question, is everything supposed to be in italics?

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That be a glitch, try refreshing

So I imagine there will be a battle between Nemesis, Jason, and Humans that have survived through time who have powers.

Ser is spell as Sir

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Negative. That's a common misconception.

Jason really need to learn to fight.

7809193 found the difference between Ser and Sir also the chapter needs some work on its grammar.

Hey when's the next chapter coming out

7917791 When it comes out

so I found a discrepancy early in this chapter that's kinda bugging me, you have them going to the CANTERLOT DOCKS, boarding SEAFARING NAVAL VESSELS as opposed to an AIRSHIP in a place that would A. be on a mountain B. isn't located next to any major bodies of water let alone a major river and C. is cited to being in the middle of centralish Germany in an earlier chapter showing us a map.
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Notice that you have Canterlot WAY to inland for them to have any semblance of a water based dock for this chapter, nothing a quick insert about travelling and town name change couldn't fix mind you ex. Hoovesburg(Habsburg) or any other silly equine pun of a town.

Also, and this is me just being a history buff, back when they went to Stalliongrad you had the character saying something about Stalingrad being in the area.. except Stalingrad is after the Crimea, nowhere inside of UKRAINE, BELARUS, POLAND, or ROMANIA which is actually where you have Stalliongrad as a nation situated with borders inside of all four of the mentioned nations while majority of it is Ukraine/Poland, in all honesty, your situating of Equestria is also hard to understand, and your geography needs a little work but otherwise the story isn't bad, rushed it seems with a few obvious grammatical issues and geographical inconsistencies, but otherwise not bad.

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Just because something named "Canterlot Docks" doesn't mean it's physically in Canterlot the city. Just in Canterlot the province. Its like saying you live in New York, you could mean the city or the state.

Also yes Stalliongrad is in polamd/Ukraine but since Stalliongrad isn't the same as Stalingrad my geography is fine. Stalliongrad was never meant to be where Stalingrad physically is/was. Especially seeing as Stalliongrad is an entire country. But that's neither here nor there.

Hope that cleared up some confusion.