Oh...I hope the army of Stalingrad rises up. Good luck explaining order 227 Jason, you'll need it.

Ok this chapter was just depressing as it makes everyone look incompetent except for the griffons who act like a deus ex machina to come in and defeat the bad guys who were barely introduced this chapter. I'm not sure whether to consider this chapter rushed or what but it doesn't seem to hit the right notes on accident rather than intentionally doing it. Why bother introducing the church if you're just going to kill them off? Why introduce three guards that want more from Luna if you're just going to kill them off? If they were already introduced than that's a fault of my own memory but this chapter doesn't feel strong, it feels like you wanted to advance the plot and throw in a few other things as well and just got through it as fast as possible.

6350146 I feel like that's how the professor writes. He just slipped up here and let us see it.

"Is that how you feel?" Nightshade asked. "And how about the rest of you? Do you all she the same feelings?"

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"Hullo," Jason said back.

"Duly noted," Celestia said. "But moving on, I said in my letter that I was sending all of you to Stalliongrad but I assume up you're wondering why."

where'd that up come from

"When am I never?" Jason said with a grin then followed the Mane Six out the door. Jason lagged behind the group as he lost himself in his own thoughts, he only broke out of it when he heard his name being called but not through his ear, h heard the voice in his head.

he

Silver Shot poked his head out as the trains doors as they opened, he saw very few people on the platform and the worsening blizzard gave them some ample cover. With quick movements they left the train and then purposefully moved onto lesser-used paths with Silver guiding them along. The blizzard tore are their cloths and drained the warmth from their faces and in Jason's case fingers and toes. Mercifully Silver's hideout wasn't far from the train station. He pushed open the heavy wood door and lead them into what looked like a tavern but it was empty besides what must have been the owner, he was an ugly old stallion with a balding head and black beard like coarse wire, he sported many scars across his face and muzzle including one that went through his left eye, blinding it and turning the whole ball white.

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Eventually they came to a heavy wooden door which one of the guards pushed open, they entered a large circular room with what looked suspiciously like an altar in the centre. It was a black slab of polished obsidian with the likeness of a prancing Alicorn on the sides, lain on top of the altar was a long thin ornate wooden box that seemed mildly important. To the left of the altar was Jason's friends and the three Night Agents, all of them looked beat up especially Rainbow Dash who was covered in cuts, they were all bound and gagged and were looking at Jason with wife fearful eyes.

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I take it the Red Army will rise up? Will Jason have a Holy Mosin Nagant?