LunaUsesCaps
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The good old immortality debate, LUC.
Nice approach, it adds very well to the whole picture of the finale of S3.
There's one thing, though. I don't think the Dark tag is placed right here. I mean, sure, eternal suffering is kind of dark, but it doesn't fit the common (mis)conception of dark around here.
PS: I know how I can annoy you! Update Athanasia! ;-)
Nice take on immortality induced passive insanity there.
I am unsure which tag is appropriate, but to me the dark tag (or the tragedy tag) is not needed.
Twilight is best Lucy and Celestia best Charlotte.
Nicely written. Your characterisation felt a bit off to me, though. Emotions conveyed with were good enough, however.
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I actually agree with you guys and note that this was done conception to submit in about an hour so I wasn't really concerned too deeply about the accuracy of my tags. Dark tag removed.
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Dislike ratio aside, I actually love the way I wrote this story. That in mind it doesn't disappoint me that the way I work isn't unanimously praised :p.
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By the way, where have you been the last three weeks? I haven't seen you in the chat. Or have I missed that there is another #FiMFictionRegulars out there?
nice!
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im interested, what are you referring to?
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Pretty much word by word from Room With A View, with the string holder as Charlotte and the kite as Lucy. Alternatively, Celestia could be the Reverend Beebe, who tells the tale.
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Was wondering if anyone would actually catch that reference. I thought of it while writing and the lines seemed perfect.
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okay, thank you.
This is as good a prequel to That Episode as I ever expect to see.
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What you said. I wish I could add to it.
Bravo. That's all that's needed to be said right now.
~Skeeter The Lurker
I'm glad I finally read this
From the synopses, I expected it to take place after Magical Mystery Cure, but I like how the story worked more as the origin for Celestia's motivation for giving Twilight Starswirl's book in the first place. Also, I think you have something nice here; I know you only meant it as a quick one-shot, but personally I'd like to see where this version of events goes. We already know that Twilight becomes an alicorn, but what happens next between her and Celestia? Does the princess get what she wants; does her student get what she wants? Furthermore, Twilight's princesshood is fairly unexplored territory; does it alter her relationship with Celestia at all?
I think there's a lot you can do with what you began in this story, LUC. I encourage you to take another look at it
Besides, you did say you liked how you wrote it. That at least counts for something.