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Donute the spartan


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Our favorite pink spartan gets crushed by Griff's sister's ship ends up the moment he gets crushed into Equestria hurt (not realy that bad) only to notice he is turned into a young pink yellow maned colt with a doughnut on his rump to him it was his name meanwhile the mane six hear a rather loud crash in the everfree forest...

I am new to this please understand if i suck badly.

PLACED ON HIATUS because of how busy my life is and how i am still plotting the next chapter
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In red vs blue. he acts girly or gay that is why it is listed sex because it i plan on him to create odd moments if he comments on stallions.
note: i will make donut have a "Perks" which is a love for butter reason butter and pink pony"s who act and seem girly
(i used girly since he is a colt if i made the setup where he is at he original age i would use the term gay)= MADNESS
i will also include dimension jumping in the future so who knows give me suggestions for the dimension(other planets
or games,movies etc note i past sins will be considered since i like Nyx but you will have to tell me in which point of the story you want me to put donut in and what happen to him including if i think is good enough this is a kind of story that is interactive but you don't control the character you control what happens lets say he turns into a mare or he duplicates himself.)later on in the story this is listed oc and other since he is a human and a oc pony i think i don't know you decide.
this is listed teen sex because i plan having him creating awkward situations such as commenting how big stallion muscles are or saying how "fabulous or beautiful" Rarity's dresses are and you can also suggest what situation he creates in any chapter note he or now i will make him like rainbows so use this to create moments.
Another note for you d now know who Donut is i recommend you research him or you have no idea why his like this.
By the way his FULL name is Franklin Delano Donut
Also im really scared when i get to the dimension jump because i don't want to plagiarize or whatever the reason why dimension jumping, fourth wall breaking he will spend (spoiler) alot of time with pinkie and rarity no no romance jus odd friendship.

(this story is set in season 2 since its more interesting than 1 and i do not know how to put discord in so no discord interludes he will be mentioned but only mentioned because i do not know how to lets say discord a pony ok i know it makes you the opposite of yourself but Franklin Delano Donut (yes donut is his last name so i did not make an error their in my defense) but donut is hard so no discord.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 13 )

HA this is going to be good

Good luck on this story my friend

look Im having a problem is he a filly or a colt?

Needs a proof reader. And most of the sentences are like a nerdy freshman trying not to be socially awkward, but failing miserably. But the idea is fucking excellent and I will favorite and like just for that. Good luck on this story! :rainbowkiss:

you can tell me what happens to him or the mane six after chapter 2 after all i planed to let you guys decide what happens

:eeyup:enters and gets all close.
Then he's adopted by :eeyup:.

It is brilliant.

So Macintosh goes along with his sis then starts to like Donut i can work with that.

Brilliant i just have to know plan a way for Donut to create mayhem with butter.

I think he should wake up see rainbow fall uncounsise wakes up again than get interogated

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Ok um.. hes a colt like a young boy but rainbow bits good.

I putting the chapter together its just have less time due test and home work.

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