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It runs on the hopes and dreams of orphans. It goes fast.

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Daniel Miller is one of the highest ranking members of the Fraternal Order of the Raven. Usually living a life of callous animosity, the Zealot soon finds himself pursuing his missing brother in an alien world filled with strange creatures and unlikely allies. However, Thomas' fate isn't the only reason for the Crow's arrival, and his ulterior motives may lead to dire consequences.

Sequel to "Where's the Fire?" which can be found here.

Bioshock: Infinite/MLP Crossover.

Chapters (28)
Comments ( 360 )

This is interesting...
I've played Bioshock Infinite and always thought the Zealots were awesome :rainbowdetermined2:
I hope you take the plot somewhere good!

It's finally here! This plot is still just as great.

Also, dat picture is awesome.

Want me to add this to the list of the group?

I have been waiting for this. I can't wait to see how things turn out; if this turns out to be a trilogy I can just see a Handyman as the next human.

2565866 Except the Handyman isn't exactly human.

HAHA YES! now then... next chapter?

Also please make more. :pinkiehappy:

2566456>>2566495 Don't worry, I'll be adding chapters frequently.

if he attacks ponyvill would that not make his brothers death be in vein???

I hope Thomas survived so he can stop his brother from doing anything, "regrettable".:twilightoops:

Comstock has sent the finest of his men. :derpytongue2:

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it could happen since i read in the news paper today that a woman had survived 16 days beneath a toppled house (i'm not sure how long it has been since Thomas death), but it sounds like the easy way out, and twilight's dream seems like some kind of foreshadowing.
but it also seems like the dream was a little too detailed, like a spoiler.

i'm not sure about anything anymore:applejackunsure:

2567633 Thanks! :pinkiehappy: And the sequel takes place a few months after the original.

This story deserves ALL the mustaches! :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

Murder of Crows is my favorite vigor in Bioshock

The first time I encountered the Zealot, they freaked me the buck out. Daniel Miller, however takes it to a whole new level. :pinkiecrazy:

Here's to hoping Daniel doesn't do anything stupid...

Still, good chapter. Really sets the tone for how those involved with Thomas feel.

Do you think you would ever go the other way around in the story? Such as someone from Equestria going to Columbia?

THE SUSPENSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:fluttershbad:

2573889 ponies don't have anything to do in Columbia. All story would be them just being shocked.
Also- Yay new chapter!

Well written. I shall favorite this story.
Keep up the good work. Speaking of which... *transforms into engineer*
*takes out sapper*
Time to go to work

Oh man! I hope time would be rewritten soon. I guess this event happens somewhere in either the middle or further into "Bioshock: Infinite".

great chapter once again! you spoil us:rainbowkiss:

Comment posted by elsilenzioso deleted May 14th, 2013
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i really like this, just read the first "wheres the fire" and the first two of this one last night. couldnt have timed it better.

oh my gosh you update fast! Thank you awesome writer, keep it up! :pinkiehappy:

More please

Can I have more?

2581840 Most certainly! :twilightsmile:

Just not right now, I gots homework to do :ajsleepy:

...Oh, wait. I think I see how this will go now, given the 'gift' Thomas received in the first story. I think.

Regardless, things are about to get very loud...

Fucking hell trixie thinks, It's her human you will have to do something about that! :pinkiecrazy:

aww i love trixie in this story:trixieshiftright:

MORE BLOOD MORE CROWS MOAR VIOLENCE!!!

this story needs more dead ponehs.....

i kid

Well, this was odd. The Trixie stuff was expected, but the guy who sounded like he was about to release a crowstorm being calm kind of threw me off...

...You're planning something, I can feel it.

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Yep. I'm beginning to see the puzzle pieces fall into place now. Smart. Hope it turns out well. :ajsmug:

Hmmm, well, I read the first and now this, it's a nice story thus far, I'm rather liking it... And I am really rather concerned for everypony now that Daniel has hit the scene... He is... ... well, he's a freaking Zealot! Those dudes are messed up on so many levels... I'd kind of like for him to discover redemption and kindness and be nice, however... I'm kind of doubting that that's the path this story's going to go down...

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