Twilight received a letter from Princess Celestia regarding a pony moving from Manehattan to Ponyville. Since nopony moved in to Ponyville after Twilight, everypony got REAL excited.
As Pinkie Pie decides to throw a party for him, they discover a whole new world. A world of Personas, Shadows, and Social Links.
Welcome to the Velvet Room. Thank you for taking your time reading this Fan Fiction.Please, take a seat and relax.
Hello,this is ChocoIceCream! As you can see,this is my first fic! It's a crossover of the Shin Megami Tensei:Persona series. Enjoy!
Chapters (1)
you have an error in one of the descriptions.
They simply don't match. one says he is from Canterlot, the other says he's from Manehatten. I haven't read this yet so I'll start once that is fixed and some more chapters are released.
I really think this is an awesome Idea and you should keep writing. It's pretty well so far!
The part at the end is really corny and uncreative.
Just saying. 
To be specific, where the protagonist reveals the supernatural event that just occurred to him like it was an every day occurrence is what I'm talking about.
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Oh, crap! My original idea was for him to be from Canterlot. I'll change it,sorry!
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Well, I ran out of things to write
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Sorry, I'll try to write better chapters
That was a prologue, anyway
2504793 I had this same idea not 10 minutes ago. I hope you do well on this story.
That being said: "Welcome to the Velvet Room, my little ponies."
2504793 Okay this has an interesting style which matches persona itself. I'd work on description and character a bit. AruShinichi is right about him no t having much reaction to it but it does have potential. I'm not an editor nor a great helper in development but I can spot a decent story. Not only the previous but it's uncommon so others will want to read it even if it's not super amazing top of the line writing but it does need to be good enough to stick. If you want any help go to [url= Overly-Extensive Editors ]http://www.fimfiction.net/group/197236/overlyextensive-editors once they are done with group renovations. They are according to the name people who are all about helping in editing and story writing. I don't know if it's any of the editors forte but someone should pick it up and help you. In the meantime Imma keep an eye on this story but I will not yet like or dislike it until I see more. so here is a cute pic.encrypted-tbn3.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcQ5wiBZ8Y8Jzi18oKh3GjomGxMQV3B1BLEVfXh9jsHHrPe5TyUW2Q