• Member Since 11th Jan, 2013
  • offline last seen Apr 20th, 2018

Lupus


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My family isn't like most families in Equestria. First, none of us are related by blood, but after what we've been through together, blood ceases to matter. Secondly, none of us are ponies. Well maybe our big brother, but he will deny it. Loudly. And third...well, we can do things. Things that might have made the ponies a little afraid of us.


So this is my first story I've ever posted online. I decided to more or less test the waters as this is my first fan fiction, and I'm not used to writing for existing characters so I'd appreciate some feedback.

Chapters (3)
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Comments ( 2 )

It feels a bit rushed but then again most escapes do. The situation their in is also a bit confusing but that will probebly be adressed later. my intrest is peaked good sir.

I really want to read the next chapter.

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