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Mr Stargazer
"Philosophy; it's like breaking the fourth wall, but in real life." - Mr.Stargazer
Mr Stargazer
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Pretty cool. ^_^
Still not sure if the ending means they ceased to exist, or something else. I blame sleep deprivation.
My mind went on a meta-induced drug trip at that ending.
So let me get this straight....
SPOILERS!!!!
You basicaly made a extremly meta story in 1000 words, where we, the readers, by simply reading the story itself create a world in itself, by reading we made the existence of life, creatures that could feel, breath and live, and at the end our daugther, Celestia, thanked us in part of them all for giving them life... To only then fade away....
SPOILER ENDS!!!!
(Note, to read spoilers click and drag your mouse on the empty space.)
This story makes other meta stories go home and cry for not being so deep in such few words.
That made my mind go into a gyrosphere and never go out.
That was good, happy and sad, so wrong but yet so right, but most importantly, it was well fu#$ing done.
Congratz
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Sign of a good author: being able to write a compelling 1000 word story. Holy shit this blew my mind. ...Again.
...Time to resign my authorship.
I WAS THE CREATOR!
2489165 NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! *cuts off hands*
Deep.
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Nu-uh, I was. The story said so.
Meh... I don't like stuff like this. Good job anyhow.
2489631 DON'T ARGUE WITH ME! THE STORY SAID I WAS THE CREATOR, WHAT IS YOUR PROBLEM?
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Come at me bro, I'll imagine a world all up and down your face.
2489719 I WILL IMAGINE CHUCK NORRIS. HAHAHA, WHAT ARE YOU GOING TO DO NOW?
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I will imagine Morgan Freeman narrating Chuck Norris leaving on a spaceship to go and nap on Mars. Check.
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NUFF SAID
2489729 I WILL CALL CHIN CHIN TO COME HERE AND TAKE YOU DOWN. CHECK MATE.
This was another good story by ya, except I don't really get the excessive spacing out of the lines. Are you trying to go for a "poetic" feel or are you striving to say that everything that happened here is it's own individual event?
Ah so this is what you meant you were making a story called "Origin" Once more its something simple and brilliant!
cool
Man, this some Matrix and Inception level stuff...
2490316Actually I was trying to make it sound like it was told verbally
You get a prime number for this excellent story:
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Except Chrysalis
Chrysalis whooped her in Canterlot
So much for the Creationist pony point of view
But still
HOT DAMN MY MIND IS SPINNING EVERY DIRECTION POSSIBLE
IF THERE WERE ANY DIRECTIONS
Fuck my mind
Very impressive
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2720467 Thank you. I hope you try some of my other ones....specificaly mordane and Monster.
So beautifully simple in both it's execution and idea. Definitely one of the best stories I have read.
they are not dead, a mans soul only goes where it is needed next, they live on as a part of me!
"Juice who mein helvete doest thou think i am!?"
too*
2/10, would not date.
Just kidding.
I loved it. There were some parts that I had difficulty with, but maybe that's just because I'm more focused on dialogue than traditional writing. I need commas to give my brain a break.
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Wow