• Member Since 15th Feb, 2013
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IceQB


Ship-writing, music-making Canadian Singaporean. Ex-military personnel, future teacher.

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EDIT: Now comes with a sequel!
EDIT2: Now comes with a threequel!
Before any comments about me ripping it off from the song, yes, most of it is his work. I'm just responsible for the parts in bold. Heck I even credited him, but I guess people don't even read the author's note at the start... -.-


Just messing around, doing a little experimentation here and there. Not actually a... story, per se... just playing inside Tavi's head.
Enjoy!

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 22 )

I red this story to get my mind off of some of the more... disturbing things i found on this site.

I'll admit.. i cried abit...until I ran into one part....

My f-fingers are g-going to b-break!

...Fingers? :applejackconfused:

...Sorry, things like these throw me off a bit...:twilightsheepish:

OH F- LOL :twilightoops:

Time to go change that... I forgot. Ponies aint got fingers. Makes me wonder how she holds the bowstring at times.

2494494 As a violinist and having played a cello before i could imagin a few ways. (i more so wonder how she plays a cello that's missing 2 tuning pegs... kinda a big part of the thing) But yeah, do change that it'd be good!

...fan fic reading at 5 Am... Sleep is for the weak! :yay:

Ps, you can reply by pressing that blog thing over a persons comment. the >>XXXXXXX Should appear in the thing

2494506 Heh, I forgot. I'm in the midst of doing a quick story before I disappear (if u read my blogs you'd know).

2494515 yeah... of couse i just meet you so i kindn't get a chance to. :derpytongue2:

Oh, and BTW...you made this derp twice

My fingers... they still hurt...

I"ve been chewed over by my proof readers for errors like these, so yeah. :scootangel:

Didn't you completely rip this off the I am Octavia song from eliemonty? Like seriously, the picture and the starting part is this whole chapter

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Gp93CoKICcQ

2494683 ... didn't i explicitly dictate that at the start?...

Well its nice to see a rendition of the songs story i was hoping there would be more.
also why did you make it out that octavia was going to kill herself, or at least that was the feels i was getting.

2494852 Oh oops sorry, but then why post a chapter on it if you already added it in the description? And I suggest you link the song as credit

2496159 I needed to get past the 1000 word limit lol :x shame on me

2495023 if i got the time, maybe I'll figure something out.

I used this description to learn the lyrics.

Yay.

2507050 LOL that's the starting part... painstakingly listened to the audio over and over again to get it right... lol... :derpytongue2:

Good read. Good start for reading fics on here.
I've got Cuatro by Dirty Bit queued up...That's gonna be fun to read (160k words? Holy saint Celestia.).
Again though, good job.

2551297 oh boy... i cant bear to read such a long thing if it doesnt catch my interest st the description... ive got high standards for stuff to read for long stories... theres too many good ones out there

2551311 it seems very interesting, and I hope it can hold my attention.

2495023 that reminds me i have a sequel now :P links in description

I listen to the I am Octavia song wile reading this :twilightsheepish:

Oh God, the FEEEEEEEEEEELS. They hurt so good!

Right in the feels

This is just like the i am octavia aftermath story in fact ill be back im gonna go and read the sequel and threequeal. Great piece of fic, 7.5/10

the problem for me is no one really covers the selfishness of octavia in the situation.

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