Uh.... gimme a little while to reread that.

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I still.... I don't know. There's a good story here but its difficult under the awkward phrases. Not to insult you but its apparent you're not native English speaking are you? I'll certainly watch for more but I'm left very confused still.

2495509 Nevertheless, he'll get better as he keeps going along. I'll admit, it was somewhat jarring and looking back through this there were mistakes that the other editors and I missed, but practice makes perfect.

Anyway forgive me for waiting so long to give this a proper visit and comment, I'm easily distracted. I'll be sure to get to work proofreading the next chapter soon.

Maybe if someone could get the chapters in his native language, then translate it into English and post it, they might make more sense.