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I am not a Dalek


A 21 year old Brit who loves all the stereotypical things like Tea and Doctor Who. I'm original. Definitely.

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Rainbow Dash adores the Wonderbolts, and when they have a show in Ponyville, how can she not buy tickets?
However, something goes wrong, causing Rainbow and a Wonderbolt to be trapped in a terrible situation.

The next story in the series is Free to Fly!

Yes, I used coverart from an episode, simply because it fits the story! :3

Chapters (15)
Comments ( 271 )

I am digging this story so far. I like the premise and the overall idea of the story. There are always things that you can fix up to make it a bit better. I look forward to reading more of this story as it comes out. Keep up the great writing!

2487431 Ah thank you! That's made me feel a lot better, the fact that I got two dislikes so quickly made me feel a bit depressed :rainbowwild: Thanks for your comment! :pinkiesad2:

Simulation?(from description) that reminds me of the book 'Divergent'

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OH I wasn't the only one then?
... And you have a good taste in books my friend.

I.....need.....more!! More! MORE!!! :pinkiehappy: :raritystarry: :heart:

Oh my, another great story by (obviously a) Dalek, and I see all those sly insertions you're making, with the hot sauce cupcakes, but in the end it wont falter is greatness. :pinkiesmile:

2488939 lol thanks... Now I'm gonna wait and see if its like divergent (now I gotta read insergent)

Snappy start to what I feel will be a great fic! You write a pretty convincing Rainbow Dash for just 1400 words so far. Keep 'em coming!

Lovin' that pic of Dash mackin' it with Soarin and Wave Chill.

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Hmm, I actually haven't read that book before :3 I may check it out xD

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Ah thank you! I've never written a pony ship fic before so I'm glad you like it :twilightblush: I'm going to update my other story first then this one will be updated :unsuresweetie:
:heart:
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Thank you :twilightblush: It's hard to portray Pinkie Pie sometimes :pinkiesad2:

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Aw thank you! I didn't think that she was that convincing! So it's a relief to know that I pulled it off! :twilightsmile:

Hmmmm.....

I'll fave this, and see where it goes.

~Skeeter The Lurker

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Ah, thank you! I hope I don't disappoint! :twilightblush:

Very nice. :twilightsmile:

A bit rushed, but I like it enough to favorite and like.

It's very interesting, I eagerly await the next chapter.

2490960 Yeah, I didn't really plan out the first chapter as much, I mean I wanted to set the mood and actually get to the performance, but the rest shouldn't be as rushed once it gets to the action, hopefully! :pinkiesad2:

Just thought I'd let you know you have another tracker.:applejackunsure:

2492272 Aw thank you! :pinkiehappy: Hopefully I wont disappoint! :pinkiesad2:

2490877>>2490133 Lol it's in a way similar to hunger games(very little) but the movie and the 3rd book are comming out soon.

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Ohh I will read if before the movie! :pinkiehappy: The Hunger Games movie was disappointing though, so if I really like this book I may not go to see the movie... :rainbowwild:

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Whatever are you talking about? I've all three books and the movie!

~Skeeter The Lurker

2492301 lol sorry, that reply was ment for someone else, I was doing all this over my iPod to I sometimes click(tap) the wrong things

Trapped in cave with soarin I see. Wonderbolt, in a cave, with u, a l o n e*wink wink* i don't know where I'm going with this lol

So, they were in the gorge itself? I thought they were like, at the top.:rainbowderp: You'd think the promoters of this event would have thought about the dangers of having an event like this in such an uncontrollable environment.:derpytongue2:

Oh well, in the mean time, I will wait for the next chapter eagerly.:rainbowdetermined2:

2492003 I'm sure the next will be better. I'm off to read chapter three!

So, if you see any fails, or are confuzzled, or just want to say hello, just drop a comment and I will reply ASAP!
Until next time guys!
<3

Confuzzled.

Oh sweet Celestia, that's my word to! I use "Confuzzled" for confused as well :pinkiehappy:

Ahem, sorry had to be done. :raritywink:

Over all, great chapter. You're getting better :twilightsmile:

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Ahh :raritywink: I wonder :pinkiehappy:

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Okay, basically, the VIP box was at the top of the gorge, but there were some people seated down the bottom of the Gorge, and the Wonderbolts performed in and above it... Sorry for the confusion :twilightblush:
And I know it was a bad idea :raritywink: But it was the only place I could think of that could be so unstable so they'd end up in this situation!
I'm really into writing this at the moment so hopefully it will be here soon! :ajsmug:

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Aww! Thank you! *Hugs* :heart:

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YAY! Confuzzled is an awesome word, but discombobulated is way better :raritywink:
And thank you! It's good to hear that my work is improving! :twistnerd:

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I'm glad you like it! :heart: You don't understand how happy comments like this make me! :twilightsmile:

Really enjoying this so far! Good job! :twilightsmile:



*boop*

2495391 Ah thank you! I'm glad that you're enjoying it! I am actually really loving writing this too! Which is a good sign for me! :pinkiehappy: Anyway, stay tuned! :twilightsmile:

Very nice :) I really like this chapter xD

2495516 Thank you! I'm glad you did! :pinkiehappy: At least I'm not disappointing anyone (that I know of) so far! :scootangel:

The interactions between them seem... Off, somehow.

That, and I don't think RD would be so eager to teach the Rainboom just yet.

Other than that, nice solid chapter.

~Skeeter The Lurker

2495651 How do you think they're off? (Just trying to figure it out) Bare in mind that they are trapped in a cave with a chance of dying... So, meh I don't know :rainbowwild: Also, we haven't seen a lot of interaction between Soarin' and Rainbow so there isn't much we can really judge it on...
I thought that Rainbow would be willing to show the Rainboom if it was a Wonderbolt, coz hey, it's not everyday you get to teach a Wonderbolt a trick or two about flying!
Anyway, thank you for the comment :twilightblush:

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Probably because of the fact that they seem remarkably calm about that.

And for the Rainboom, it's along the line of its not yet perfected in my eyes.

~Skeeter The Lurker

2495706 Well they're both the kind of characters who don't really want to show that they're losing their cool, especially Rainbow...
And even if it's not perfected Rainbow isn't going to tell him that due to the fact that she doesn't want to seem weak...
But I don't know, we're all entitled to our opinion. :rainbowwild:

Awsome story :heart::pinkiehappy::derpytongue2::heart:
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I'm actually finishing off the next chapter now (instead of doing homework!) So it should be up soon! :pinkiesad2: I'm glad you like it! :heart:

2496291 YYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSS:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::duck::duck::duck::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart:

Hm... Interesting take on his cutie mark tale.

They still feel far too calm about this, though. But that's just me, I guess.

~Skeeter The Lurker

Great story I can't wait for the next chapter!~:twilightsmile:

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Indeed, I've really been in the mood to be writing a lot recently! :pinkiehappy:

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Well Rainbow did explain in the last paragraph that she feels more relaxed coz Soarin' is there, anyway, what else can they do, if they freak out it wont get them anywhere... and since when have we seen Rainbow freak out? It's too out of character in my opinion...

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Ah, Thank you! I'm not sure when the next chapter will be up but hopefully soon! :twilightblush:

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The second time she did the Rainboom for one.

~Skeeter The Lurker

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But what about in all the other episodes where she's been in danger, she generally tries to keep her cool...

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Keyword: Tries. Still. I get your point.

~Skeeter The Lurker

Very well written, I WANT MORE!

Very nice! :twilightsmile:

Yay, you're improving! :twilightblush:

Keep up your good work!

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Hopefully there should be more soon, but I am back at school and whatnot! :fluttercry:

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Aw! Thank you! It's nice to know I'm getting better! :heart::fluttershyouch:

YYYYYYYYEEEEEEESSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::trollestia:
Ugh schoool is sooo boring I wanted to read this chapter soooo bad yesterday and today but school is sooo slow :pinkiecrazy::twilightangry2::twilightangry2::twilightangry2:
anyway AWSOME!!!!!! :pinkiehappy::heart::pinkiehappy:
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pls :twilightblush:

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