Father Mare has come a long way since when I started it. This is one of the facts about many series like it, since the author improves over time (unless you're Tara Gilesbie, that is). However, with this being said, I feel as if I need to tell you guys something about this.
Soarin and Spitfire are now separate after the birth of their foal, because they fell out of love with one another about seven months in.

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Now I bet you're wondering what's going on with the timeline for Father Mare. After all, we had "Wonderbolt Academy" in Season Three, which Soarin didn't appear in (at least to my knowledge), then Testing Testing, 123 and Rainbow Falls in Season 4. I understand the former wasn't so much based on the Wonderbolts themselves as it was based on Rainbow Dash learning about their history, but I figured it should add in.

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Now I understand I haven't updated this thing in so long, but I am working on it. It's just a lot slower than usual.

But now I introduce you to a little thing I came up with to inspire people to leave comments on the story. I'm currently working on a little side story that had Rainbow Dash dealing with her lifelong crush on Soarin after getting an invitation to their wedding during the future events of Father Mare. If you comment on the story, I'll message you with a link to the document.

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Now after my first failure to get into the Royal Guard, I got quite a bit of feedback. Most of it was bad, and I feel bad because of it, mostly for the fact that I wasted a prereader's time with a story that obviously wasn't good enough.

But that brings me to the subject of this blog. What are some of my major flaws when it comes to writing? (Stick to Father Mare please. I know what's wrong with the other story, and I have yet to fix it.)

Some of the points I got from the review:

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First of all, I apologize to Lord of Dorkness for being confused about what they meant in their comment.

But before you go arguing with me about how I should be doing this in the comments section of my story, I need to set something straight. I meant for Chapter 5 to be the best, and all people can do is message me with their lists of problems with it, plus I gained a full three dislikes after its publishing.

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After doing a bit of math, I'm up to 1000 total views on my best story. Yay!

Considering that this is a new thing for me that's never happened before, let's party hard!

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Realize that I haven't watched all of Rainbow Falls yet, mostly due to a lack of time between homework and socializing. (Yes, I have a social life. Shocker...) But there's something major I've noticed going on. The writers seem to hate the Wonderbolts.

Now don't get me wrong, there's nothing bad with what they've done with them as far as I've seen. I'm actually trying to match canon with Spitfire's drill sergeant role at the Academy, because I love mares that can take charge that way.

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Apparently some overly-enthusiastic fan of my story Father Mare added it to two groups related to the characters.

While I don't have a problem with this, could you please tell me if you're going to do so? That way, I can know who's seeing my stuff, and whether or not I want it added to certain groups. After all, if any of you decided to add any of my other train wrecks to Plan 9 From Equestria, I wouldn't be very happy, but I'd probably accept because they were horrible.

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I've been struggling to write my stories as of late. And now, with the inclusion of college, I'm going to be even more busy than ever before.

So I must ask: would any of you like to collaborate on Father Mare? It's currently the easiest one for me to write, and it's the only story of mine that I truly enjoy. The rest of them are just pitiful attempts at picking up a fanbase.

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