Hey everypony so I edited my last chapter but it ended up being less scary. Maybe I should stick to “normal” stories. What do you all think?

Hey everypony my connection went off suddenly today while I was editing so I’m feeling pretty upset. I’ll edit the chapter again another time so stay tuned.

Again please point out any mistakes of details, grammar, spelling, etc. as I’m not much of a writer but um actually I think that’s it... just tell me what to improve of is basically what I’m saying.