Hi, y'all. I thought of updating you all on the next chapter of Dawn Before Twilight. So, since I am trying out Scrivener for the first time (or second, if I count the small, overwhelmed time of its previous version), I want to try writing the episode as a long short story - since that's what episodic chapters kind of are; a mini-story within a larger narrative.

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Hi, y'all. I am going to be updating you about the reason for why I deleted "Season 1 (Part Two)". Well, I'd like to keep the story in one, full-length published form so that everypony can enjoy the experience of reading it without having to move to the next part of the story in a separate post.

I've just moved "A Canterlot Visit" to the full story as the episode which happens after "Bridle Gossip".

I hope I make sense. I'm not very good at explaining in long-term form.

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Hi, everypony. I know some of you are waiting on the next part of "A Canterlot Visit". Well... the reason for it is going to be a bit late is because I've been working on the next season of the story as well as the prequel with Edward Sapphire.

I hope y'all will be patient.

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I've just posted the prologue to the tenth chapter (20th overall) of Dawn Before Twilight. I hope you will enjoy this chapter as soon as I get the first part done and up.

The epilogue to the episode is now posted. I hope you enjoy it, readers!

Enjoy the latest chapter, readers. We've hit the 50,000 milestone of the story!

Hi y'all. I know you guys are waiting for the fourth and final part of the ninth episode of Season 1 to Dawn Before Twilight; don't worry, it's still in the works. I'm just taking it slow to not put it up too quickly like the other eleven chapters of previous episodes. There's no need to rush the story just because people like it, am I right?

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I forgot to update you all yesterday, so I decided to make a blog today. The major episode change of Dawn Before Twilight is now up, titled, Cloudsdale. I hope you'll enjoy this episode change and its current parts. The third part and the epilogue is next to write.

The epilogue to the episode retelling, Dragonshy is now up. This was a fun, anticipated episode I wanted to write for a while. And I managed to write almost 7.000 words (with a little assistance from the co-author, Edward Sapphire, at the beginning of the chapter).

I hope you enjoyed the chapter retelling of the episode, readers! Let me know your thoughts on the chapter itself.

The fourth and last part of Dragonshy is now up! There will be an epilogue chapter as the finale of the episode retelling.

Part 3 of 4 for the chapter Dragonshy is now posted, everypony! Check it out if you haven't yet!

Part 2 of 3 for the episode Dragonshy is now posted. Let's hear your thoughts on it so far, readers!

The second part of the chapter, Dragonshy, is in the works as of this blog update. While I am writing it alone, my co-author is currently doing some other things of his own. So that may be a reason in some form of improvement of the chapter from the previous episode with the writing style. It's because it's my style that is used, so that it's better to read (not that I mean to offend my co-writer, of course).

A small update for readers. Thank you for your patience!

-Dawn Darkness

The first part of the seventh chapter is now posted on Dawn Before Twilight! I hope you guys will enjoy the new chapter after a long wait.

Here's an update for you all, who wait with possible impatience on the next chapter of Dawn Before Twilight. We, me and Edward, are currently 1/4 way in the chapter (that's to say 1.200 words). We're currently going through the episode Dragonshy to write our interpretation of the events down.

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Hello, ponies. Here's an update to what I have been doing since I was offline from the site.

First off, I've been working on my original projects. My ideas have become a bit more original than derivative in nature. I'd say that's a sign of improvement on storytelling on my part. The projects have been going well. I've been writing and outlining a space opera fantasy story, with the first book in the outlining phase at this moment.

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Hi y'all. Me and my co-author, Edward Sapphire, are back with a new chapter on Dawn Before Twilight. Sorry for the long wait (eight months... dear Celestia!) But that was all because of two things: One, two short-lived cancellations. And two, me writing to be a published author one day.

We'll be continuing the story, so we hope you'll enjoy reading the rest of what's missing after those eight months of time. Until then, have a good day, ponies!

That's right, folks. I've decided to give it a second chance after having gotten eight months away from Friendship is Magic. I'm co-authoring it with Edward Sapphire again.

A small post to inform you all on the story's comeback. Hope you're all excited (those who followed the story and newcomers to it). Enjoy when Chapter 3 of Dawn Before Twilight is out.

Hey guys. An update.

Since I chatted with my co-writer on Discord regarding Dawn Before Twilight, we'll be taking a December break to refuel our ideas about how the first season of My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic happened and what was going on in it.

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Hello, everyone. I am trying to make comedy my first thing in "Dawn Before Twilight", and...well...it's not my greatest strength, really. It's flat, I might say.

I am looking for advice on how to write comedy. Give me some tips on where to begin, how to write a funny sentence, etc. Because, well, my only known strength is action and adventure stories. Comedy stories is not among them, but I try my best in various fields on writing stories.

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