Sorry readers. My real life got more complicated and I just don’t have the time to write more then one story at a time.

I put all my effort into Prince of Dreams so I’m calling it quits for Doom.

What I had planned was Doom putting Celestia on trial. Pointing out her Unicorn focused school was Tribal in nature. How she authorized the building of Applelooza on “Buffalo” land. So she quietly invaded. How Luna nearly brought doom to the planet when she was Nightmare Moon.

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Okay on my story Doom of Griffonstone I brought up the theory I have about Thorax and Pharynx’s mother. I am cutting and pasting it here because I’m sure not everyone that follows me reads every story I wrote.

Anyone else wondered why Pharynx and Thorax looked different from the other changelings? of course the original forms were just to make it easier to identify them for the audience, and the background changelings were just mass reproduced.

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The final Act Doom’s assault on Equestria has begun. I do regret I don’t have much more planned for this story. There is the meeting the mane 6, Gilda and Rainbow Dash have a falling out, fight Changelings to the castle, Doom’s handling of Cheese legs Chrysalis. Doom’s handling of Celestia and some more.

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I'm going to be cutting back on how often I post to a story. This so I can read and do edits listen to those proofreading and not have me worry about time crunches.

The next Story of getting a post is Doom of Griffonstone.

I'm, rerewriting the prologue of Prince of Dreams thanks to all the input of the Proof Readers. It's going to be a full Chapter and a new Prologue going to be posted.

Posted two updates today. Chapter 15 and Chapter 16!

Chapter 16 is a crossover that was already posted on Alvasa's story The Smiling Monster of the Everfree.

Working with Alvasa changed my outline some, in a good way. I got some fun ideas that make for a grander adventure! Really is a fun collaboration between us and there still more coming!

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Reality is being annoying. Nothing bad in fact very good, just time-consuming.

My Nephew in law got a new job with very good pay and with benefits. To have this job they need to move and so our family been helping out packing and preparing for the move. With three children under the age of 13, this is a challenge.

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There no excuse I’m being lazy this weekend. Next Chapter of Doom of Griffonstone not out of outline stage. Just a few things to think about how to write fully.

I did notice a time problem. It taking Doom to long to rescue Hans and Gilda. I could solve it in a few ways. One Discord plays with time so events in the “Show” take longer, or he really fools around and cut to commercials. That could be fun.

Another way could be Doom finds them one after the other.

I'm about 2000 words in chapter 12. It is taking me a little more time then I expected, that and I got a new dog so been distracted. Don't worry the next chapter of Doom of Griffonstone going to be published either later today or sometime tomorrow morning.

teaser!

“My Majesty may I introduce you to Doctor Maud Pie.  Expert in rock science.”

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As I was just chilling talking to another writer I mentioned I was having trouble with a scene.

I won't spoil it but the scene involves Hans being creepy. Trying to describe Hans I said he similar to the Slender Man. The more I thought about what I want Hans to look like, and how he moves, and fight. It became clear Hans Was a Slender man.

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I have changed any reference of Crow to Raven. This is just more lore fun, Raven's were the pets of ODIN. Huginn and Muninn were their names, or in modern meaning Memory and Thought.

I originally wrote Crow as a joke on the term Crone, but as I wrote and finalized the lore in my brain I realized it was a mistake. I wanted to limit the sub-species of Griffons to five groups.

Types of Griffons.

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Nothing stops DOOM. Not even a power surge!

Here you go everyone Doctor Doom taking over of Griffonstone and verbally giving Celestia a beat down.

Got the new surge protector/ power strip.

This morning I typed out close to 1500 words. Around a thousand of it was Doom viewing the history of Equis. Doom figured out how to use the Infinity Gauntlet.

Hans has his own body it behaves much like the T-1000 just black instead of silver. Thought Celestia and Luna thinks he’s a Nightmare given the time he was in Doom’s subconscious.

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Yesterday a powerful storm came through my area. Don’t fear I’m fine and no household damage.

The lightening however was a problem with the Power outage.

My Surge Protector my computer was plugged in is now shot. I already ordered a cheep replacement. Till it arrives I’m limited to my cell. So next chapter might be delayed.

I have two choices.

1.) Doom and Celestia get into a physical battle. Problem is I’m struggling with why. Part of me is Luna appears and starts the fight. The fight ends in the Dreamweed fields.

2.) Doom and Celestia are highly intelligent. This should result in non-physical combat of wit. Doom exposes Blueblood via hologram recordings of the duel. That and Doom asks “Is Dreamweed illegal in Equestria?” The answer is yes and then motions to the fields outside the city.

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Chapter Seven is a little challenging. Doom will be fighting about two hundred normal guards as he gets to the castle. Along the way, Glados shows up again and tries to kill Gilda. At the castle, he fights a one on one duel with a Minotaur guard. A magic battle with Blueblood. Perhaps kills griffon council lord before the others flee.

Yeah, constant fighting... I hope I do this right and keep it entertaining! The payoff going to be interesting.

I'm trying to be creative and leave little hints of things I have planned. This started with the old crow griffon warning to Gilda.

Now I'm writing the payoff of some of the hints of Hans backstory. I'm curious what you all think what is happening? Do you have any theories forming?

I won't give any spoilers I'm just curious if the 'hints' I been leaving in earlier chapters are paying off.

Soon Victor von Doom going to rest. During that time the dream walking Princess Luna going to notice the strange mental scape.

Now I want her to meet Hans but I’m trying to think what is more creepy.

1,) mask and hands with just a shadow like body.

2.) a body that looks normal but moves disjointed.

3.) a flickering form jumping from place to place. Think like a video game glitching.

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So I went far from my normal writing with Doom of Griffonstone. I’m writing darker themes and details. Not to mention some don’t like the Displaced stories.

I want to know what you all think am I doing alright going so far from my normal content?

Just so you know yes Nightshade will be returning soon I got a few fun ideas!

I'm searching for insults for Doctor Doom to say. Among those who would be regularly insulted is the character Hans who stuck in Doom's mind. The more clever and funny the better.

Any website with insults might help as well if you know of any! Or just post one in the comments!