I've edited Luster Dawn's Roommate · 10:12am Mar 26th, 2020
A common criticism was that it was too fast, so I added some extra sentences to the climax. I'm not good at endings because I want to publish chapters as soon as I've finished them, and my pre-reader didn't know how to help me with pacing.
I've been writing a lot of oneshots because I have writer's block for my ongoing fanfics. Should I start doing commissions?