I've been writing Death March for about a year and a half, I've read through all your comments and reread the story several times. I feel like there's a lot I could redo better and a lot that I should change. But I'm unsure if I should, so I'd like to leave it to y'all.

There are some things that I won't change, such as the main characters and certain plot points but I'd like your opinions on what I should do.

Feel free to comment and please keep it constructive.