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Jan
11th
2024

The needs of the many... · 2:15pm January 11th

I'm starting to make some real progress on my story "Danger Close" (unfortunately I'm still stalled out on "The Blue and the Grey") and I've already got almost two thousand words into the next chapter. My latest move is to find a possible new use for Daring Doo. She appeared early in my story, but I haven't worked her in very much since. The idea I had was for her is to possibly pursue a potential gamer changer in regards to the Storm King and the invasion, pretty much a nuclear option. There

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Jul
25th
2023

Uncharted Waters · 11:50pm Jul 25th, 2023

I've been working recently at the latest chapter of "Danger Close", and I've run into a problem. I've wanted to let one of my characters have a speech impediment, namely an occasional stammer. But, not having any personal experience with anyone with this issue, and having no training in the subject matter, I can't help but worry about whether I can do this and not have the character just seem like a stereotype. Has anyone else out there had any experience like this? Is there a good way to do

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May
8th
2023

The Cost of War · 3:31am May 8th, 2023

I am making more progress of recent on the story "Danger Close" and I hope to have another chapter out within the next week or so. I'm aware that I don't have a huge following, but I still plan to finish the stories I've started. Today, my writing had to take a nasty turn as I've had to kill a character.

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Feb
1st
2023

Do Stories Have An Expiration Date? · 2:24pm Feb 1st, 2023

My story, "Danger Close", was originally started in the middle of 2019, right in the middle of the last season of MLP:FIM. I admit that it's been a long haul trying to figure out just how I wanted to structure it, and exactly how the story should develop. I'm not much of a writer, and even as a reader I tend to stick a little too much to history as opposed to fiction, which can limit one's imagination somewhat. But in the last several months I've gotten more momentum worked up and have gotten

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Nov
17th
2022

Something is Coming · 3:09am Nov 17th, 2022

I've been plowing ahead these last few days on the long delayed next chapter of "Danger Close", and I think I can say that it will be finished by next week. I should ideally feel a certain sense of pride, were it not for the fact that it has taken me close to two years to get this far. It's not that surprising as such things go. There are a lot of stories out there that have stalled out over the years, basically because life goes on, and distractions come up in life. I hope that there is still

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Feb
17th
2020

How do you build tension? · 9:45pm Feb 17th, 2020

Of the three stories that I have going right now, I've decided today to do some work on "Danger Close". The next chapter though is going to be tricky, as I have to balance the actual threat from the Storm King Invasion with the tedious process that the defenders have to use in a situation of limited communications to discover the threat. The scenario kind of reminds of the Pearl Harbor attack, where a fairly vague warning was delayed due to telegraph issues, while an actual warning was ignored

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Aug
25th
2019

Hitting Pause · 3:43pm Aug 25th, 2019

Decided today to acknowledge the obvious by putting "Danger Close" on hiatus. I simply haven't been getting anything done on it of recent, and I've been tempted to go in a new direction. I still plan, as of now, to tell the story, because I think that I've got a potentially interesting character who has an interesting story. But I think that she needs a different introduction.

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Aug
3rd
2019

War Stories · 1:46pm Aug 3rd, 2019

I've been slowly moving forward on Chapter 2, and I've come up with an idea. I'm wondering if just maybe the story would work if I used "Saddle Row Review" as a source of inspiration. Of course, it would have to be quite different, and the interview format wouldn't be able to catch all the details, but it just might make the introduction of so many new details easier. Has any other author tried to use this template? I'd love to know how it worked for them.

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Jun
30th
2019

Delayed Action · 5:23pm Jun 30th, 2019

Well, it's been a busy couple of months, and I find myself still trying to get things worked out. Physically, I'm still dealing with small issues related to my recent operation. Mostly the small annoying things that come as the result of prostate surgery. (and no I will no elaborate) Story wise though, I'm looking over the progress I've made on chapter 2 and I can't help but wonder if what I'm doing will make sense for other readers. In times like this, the lack of any real canon regarding

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Apr
26th
2019

Another perspective from another writer · 5:03pm Apr 26th, 2019

Stumbled today across another story of what happened in Canterlot during the Storm King invasion. Oh my...I'm not sure what to think. By description, it reminds me of what I have planned, though it certainly isn't identical by any stretch. I guess it shows that someone else had a similar insight as to some of the problems with the movie's plot, which I guess shows that I was onto something. (it is a bit silly to think that I was the only one who noticed) It sounds though like he took a much

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Apr
4th
2019

Some explaining to do · 3:41pm Apr 4th, 2019

Well, I've taken the plunge, and I'm glad I did, though I am wondering if I should have waited till chapter 2 was done first. Oh well, nothing ventured, nothing gained.

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