I have moved on from the Mother Moon stories. I had way too many ideas and wanted to try newer things, it also became harder for me to think of new stuff to do with a mischief-filled filly. So I started other projects and set the Mother Moon stuff aside.

Now onto a week ago when LightningChaser04 started making comments on my original Mother Moon, Daughter Nightmare story.

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I'm writing the first chapter of my Equestria Girls story. It just takes a little more time than expected. First Netflix stopped having the first EG movie so I had to find it somewhere else. Second is I got sick, no it's not that Cronaviruis. It just a normal stomach bug mild flu got muscle aches that making it annoying to sit at the computer for long.

The new story is coming just give me a few more days.

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Well here I am about finished with the second installment of the Mother Moon Trilogy.

Then an idea pops into my head of a little girl looking at Vice Principal Luna and asks “So your my mommy?” The idea of Nightshade going into the Equestria girls universe was born.

I’m still got a few issues to figure out for the last of the Mother Moon trilogy. So doing a side story idea could give me time to figure out the problem I have.

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Alright, I'm working on the second story of my Mother Moon Saga. I have the third story already being formed in my mind. There just one major problem Zecora!

I have enough problem writing normally, rhyming gives me the shivers. However, for the plot I have in mind Zecora going to be involved. Now I won't spoil any ideas and this is a project for the future. A few months away perhaps.

Still... there no way I can do Zecora right!

Here I was about ready to start my new story. Then talk with Venerable Ro got me thinking about the butterfly effect.

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As I work on part two of Mother Moon, Daughter Nightmare I been thinking of Nightshade's "Shadow" powers. More directly if she runs across some Umbrum between shadows.

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I sit here at the computer thinking about what to write next. I got ideas, the changeling invasion in my Mother Moon universe, A human in Equestria story. Even adding more to my Mother Moon Joys of Parenthood.

As much as I want to, I just can't find myself writing it out. I sit here looking at the blank computer screen and finding it more a chore to write than a pleasure. When there is no joy in doing it then there no reason too.

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Alright I’m getting ready to start on the next story arc involving Nightshade and Luna.

The story take place during the Royal Wedding and the Changling Invasion.

I thought of two titles...

1.) Mothers Moon, Love bugs
2.) Mother Moon, Cousin Love

The second matches the title theme and style a bit more then the first one. Mother Moon is Luna, Daughter Nightmare is Nightshade, going with the theme Cousin Love is Cadence. I guess Celestia will end up Auntie Sun.

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Well fate been messing around with my life again. Not bad news just distractions.

On top of that I have the reverse problem then writers block. Three stories bouncing in my head. The sequel to Mother Moon, one of the Mother Moon side stories, and a human in Equestria self insert with my own little twists.

This coming Monday I post something, just not sure what. Oh and some more fixes to Mother Moon, Daughter Nightmare.

Didn't do many changes to these two chapters. I thought they worked well just had some lines changed better match what happens in later chapters.

Now I'm finished with the first story of Mother Moon, Daughter Nightmare. It's time to fix the past chapters before starting the next story.

For all those who following the story I'm interested in hearing of your opinions and creative criticism on how to improve the chapters. One person, I heard from thought the ending was a little weak. I have also been told that Celestia talking with Luna in the Epilogue is a bit weak. So anything else I should focus on improving?

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I blame life just didn't have the time to finish Chapter five for me to release it Wednesday morning. Don't worry I'm still working on it! Just taking me more time then I thought and other things ate up my free time.

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"Yes, after long hard work the new and improved Chapter One is done!" Flim says with a bow.

"Smoother, and bolder than ever before!" Flam added.

"What are you two doing in my Blog post!"

"We just trying to help sell your product deer writer!"

"The blog and story are free. Go, get out of here."

"Free? Say it isn't so!" The two took off running.

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As I start working on the next chapter of my story and preparing for a new arc, I went back and started reading.

Seeing the first chapter it’s clear I need to rewrite it. Just a few weeks and I improved so much. Perhaps it’s just I got a clearer perspective of what I want in this story.

So I will be rewriting the earlier chapters for a better whole.

In my latest story I came up with a possible reason for Nightmare Moon. So far I laid down some of this past, but two key events happen that broke my Luna’s mind.

I’m curious to know if my followers figured out what I have in mind. There also a question in my mind of how different could I go with established lore.

The character I’m thinking of changing a bit is Sombra. Got an idea that he was a Unicorn in the Nobility of Equestria before arriving in the Crystal Empire.

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In all my story notes I state. I have a number of learning disabilities, including dyslexia and Asperger’s syndrome. Those make grammar and spelling hard for me to remember.

In my latest story I’m starting just after the defeat of Nightmare Moon. If I follow the show Princess Luna would be speaking in Shakespeare style of English. A whole other set of grammar rules to follow.

So in my next chapter she going to be told to stop talking like that. For the good of the foal of course.

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I have enough trouble with modern English grammar. Now I have to use Shakespeare’s English to be faithful to Luna in my story.

Almost want to hit the person that came up with it for Lunar Eclipse. I’m glad they dropped that gimmick in later episodes.

My problem is my story taking place before that Episode. Worst is I have some flashbacks to include.

Wait... How come in Shadow Play none of the past Ponies didn’t speak old English? Not one thee or thou from Starswirl.

I took some advice and cleaned up Chapter One of Mother Moon, Daughter Nightmare. The pace is still a bit fast but thinking about it I'm not going to go nuts trying to flesh it out more. With nine characters and it being just after the Action Scene in the episode, the face pacing does make sense.

Going forward there be less clutter as the story focuses on Princess Luna, Nightmare Moon (being renamed Nightshade), and Celestia. Other characters will be just background or minor characters.