What went wrong? (My latest story) · 9:41am Oct 28th, 2017
Hello Readers!
With my current story sitting at 2 upvotes to 4 downvotes, it's starting to look like it's going to be my first story to bomb on this site. So, I think it would be a good time to ask all of you guys a few questions about it. That way I can really learn from this story and not repeat any sort of mistake that I unknowingly committed. I believe that's what has happened. Anyways, my questions:
1) Was the grammar sound?
2) Was it faithful to the source material?