So I'm about four chapters into a sequel to this story. Would anyone be interested in proofreading/beta reading it? I'm not the best at taking criticism, but I'm trying to get back into the swing of writing and doing it regularly for once and that seems like it might help.

So uh, did I reference some fandom meme in To Rekindle the Sun?

Because my rejection letter from Equestria Daily mentioned they don't age well, but I haven't a clue what they were referring to.

If anyone is interested, AShadowofCygnus has done a lovely audio reading of To Rekindle the Sun.

Also I'm planning a sequel.