If it seems that I've been taking forever it's because I have. As I said in my last blog I was trying to make some changes in my life. Some are going okay, others not so okay. I failed my road test due to a simple mistake caused by a migraine. So now I have to take online courses and practice for 24 hours. Plus I'm trying out some new medication to help my migraines. It helps somewhat, but I have to drink plenty of water or else I might get kidney stones. Plus it makes me kind of drowsy. Most

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So one of the upcoming chapters will be based on its about time. After reading some feedback, I've decided this would be a place to introduce the Legion of Superheroes. The story will closely follow their debut in Adventure Comics #247 The heroes are to be presented as follows.

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It's been two...I think months since I last posted a chapter. I've kind of been busy with other things. Mostly work related. As well as dealing with a bit of writers block. I'll try to get Super Bloom part 2 finished this month. I promise.

So the next episode is Sisterhooves Social, and to be honest, I'm drawing a blank on how to bring Apple Comet into it. It's definitely one where he would be featured. But there just isn't much for him to do or add to the story. I'll mull on it a little longer, but right now I'm thinking I'm just going to skip over to The Cutie Pox. I've got a pretty good idea for that.

So I meant to include this in an author's note for the last chapter but it slipped my mind. The next chapter is Nightmare Night and I want to hear your ideas for Comet's costume. Leave them below. Also, a sneak peeks, Luna will not be visiting Ponyville alone next chapter. I won't say who it is, but they will be a very important pony in Comet's life.

Lesson Zero: I admit I don't have any ideas for this episode. But I can't skip out on Twilight going crazy.

Luna Eclipsed: Luna is joined by fellow nobility from Gotland City. The Duke and Duchess of Gotland and their young son.
Sisterhooves Social: Maybe this could be a Big Mac and Apple Comet chapter.

The Cutie Pox: Apple Bloom becomes jealous of Apple Comet spending time with Scootaloo. A freak encounter with Red Koltonite causes her and Apple Comet to swap powers.

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So for the next chapter, I'm thinking of jumping ahead to season two. The reason being I don't think the last two episodes provide Comet with that much to do. Party of One is a Pinkie Centric episode with her friends working in tandem to keep Pinkie distracted. I originally thought the idea of Comet having to hide the secret entrance to his ship would be a good subplot, but I didn't think that was enough to warrant writing what would otherwise just be Party of One. It doesn't change the episode

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Courtesy of Sipioc. Nice to see my work inspiring others. That's part of what this fandom is about.

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So I'm having trouble deciding what Season 1 episode to feature Comet in next. I've already skipped over a couple of episodes I didn't think offered many opportunities for good storytelling or where it wouldn't make sense for him to be there. The problem now is deciding what episode to do next?
Here are the ones I'm considering.

Fall Weather Friends
An episode that takes place at Sweet Apple Acres. The only problem is there's not much for Apple Comet to do.

Feeling Pinkie Keen.

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I know it's starting to seem like Deja-vu but on my birthday after typing up the title to my latest chapter, I accidentally hit publish instead of edit. I ended up posting a blank page with a title. But now it's finished and up for you all to view. Hopefully, this won't happen a third time.

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/282716/31/comet-the-colt-of-steel/mommys-beary-angry

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So today is my 30th birthday and it doesn't feel any different from yesterday. I'm going out to dinner with my folks at Don Ramon's for Mexican.
And then we're going to have cake at home. Not much more than that other than answering some phone calls from friends and family.

Also, you might have seen I have another chapter published. Ignore that, I accidentally hit publish while I was going for edit. All you would've seen is a title and a blank page. Sorry for any inconvenience.

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So apparently, I accidentally posted the next chapter of Comet the Colt of Steel back on August 14th when it was nowhere near ready. It's a bad habit of mine. But It's finished and posted up now so you can go read it whenever. Here's a link to it, https://www.fimfiction.net/story/282716/29/comet-the-colt-of-steel/for-the-birds Let me know what you think in on the story comments.

So my work on the next chapter is taking longer than I thought it would. But I've got two deleted scenes that I've published in the meantime. Hope you enjoy it.

So two months ago Brightburn dropped in theaters, and I didn't get around to seeing it. But the idea of a Superman horror movie is strange I'll give it that.

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I'm down in Georgia getting ready to head out to a family reunion with my brother, my sister in law, my two nephews, my dad, my step-mom, my step-siblings, My grandparents and my Uncle, Aunt and Cousins from England. We're heading down to the beach for a week of stormy weather and staying in a beach house. I know it sounded better before I saw the forecast. Anyway, the good news is over the last week, I've made tremendous progress on the latest chapter and if all goes well, It should be

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I was having a little trouble starting the next chapter. I couldn't decide on the setting and circumstances for the final that takes place. Some of the ideas I had included the heart of a raging storm which I felt was too much like the fight in the last chapter, a stormy sea of clouds, a starry sky which I didn't think was scary enough, and the Moon which I also already did. I also couldn't decide how Nightmare would fight them, I already had her as a giant, a pack of timberwolves, an illusion

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One of my favorite fan fiction stories is Fallout Equestria. I'm a big fan of the series having played 3,4 and New Vegas. I haven't played the first two but that's because the version I bought was for windows only. For a while now I've been thinking about doing a possible one-shot the reveals Comet's fate in the FOE timeline.

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The following is a first draft of the first scene.

Dreams in Darkness.

Bloom-El's POV.

"ROAR!"

THWOOSH!

KRUNCH!

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I've been stuck working on the latest chapter going on two months now and the scene that's got me stuck ironically is a kitchen scene at the El's house. I've decided to introduce a new character to the El household that might actually work. His working name, for now, is Karriagex. He is a service robot based on the character of Kelex Jor-El's robotic assistant. The best way I can describe him is to think of a gold metallic pony skeleton without the hind legs and tail. Instead, he hovers on an

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For those of you still waiting for me to publish the next chapter, I've got news to update you on. First I've been working the last two months 8 to 4 at my seasonal job and I'm usually pretty tired when I get home. Second, I've coping with some writers block with the latest chapter and that usually means a lot of time spent sitting and thinking of ways to get past them. Third I have a portion of cut content from the latest chapter to share with you. Hope you enjoy.

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