Tomorrow - Under a Tree Chapter 3 · 3:36am Mar 29th, 2015
Good evening everyone. Under a Tree has been finished. I'll be posting the new chapter tomorrow (Sunday) and republishing the original, which I have never deleted.
Good evening everyone. Under a Tree has been finished. I'll be posting the new chapter tomorrow (Sunday) and republishing the original, which I have never deleted.
This weekend, I will be performing tense surgery on My First Tree. After, well, some rather harsh feedback regarding the tense and the voices (since this story leaned heavily on the voices for perhaps far too long), and some of my own thinking on it, I've decided that the experiment was a failure in some aspects. Not all. I still would like to keep the tale as Applejack tells it intact. I think, despite some of the criticism regarding that portion, that it worked rather well.