Fucking hell, i can't seem do anything right with my story. The moment i think i'm good, i realize something is wrong or someone else points out something. Just damn it, damn it damn it damn it damn it! its so fucking ironic huh? i can make a great story, plot wise but, can't do grammar or punctuation for shit. Fucking pisses me off and it makes me wonder why i'm even bothering. I'm gonna try to find a good editor to help me fix my fuck up. This is getting ridiculous...