Okay so as most of you (my followers) know my original fan fic that I published wasn't very well executed, but sticking to a few of the original plot lines I had in mind for it I have refurbished and improved by correcting most of the errors (not going to say all as I probably missed a few grammatical as I am dividing my time between about twenty different things these days) and redid one of the main characters since. If you have read it and stopped because of the alicorn in the begging that

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