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May
2nd
2023

Live on Google Play! · 5:52am May 2nd, 2023

Hey, guys, just wanted you to know that What I've Become and Nightmare of the Past is now live on Google Play! So, if you didn't have a kindle-compatible device before, you can buy both books for 3.99 each right now on Google Play! I'll be working to get them into more outlets during the next couple of days, so keep an eye out for them!

What I've Become

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Apr
9th
2023

New description of What I've Become. · 11:09pm Apr 9th, 2023

Hey, guys, I'm working on making a new description for What I've Become (The printed version on Amazon) because the current one really doesn't do the story justice. It doesn't even really tell the potential reader about what's inside it. It's honestly one of the larger mistakes I've made with this whole thing, and I was wondering if I could get your thoughts on this new one I've been throwing together:

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Mar
23rd
2023

New artwork! · 7:24am Mar 23rd, 2023

So, I had Lazybuns do a drawing of what his version of the cover of the first book was, and I think it came out pretty good! Google changed a few things, though, so for some reason I can't link the picture here and have it pop up, but I can post the link itself:

Edit: Fixed it.

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Dec
20th
2022

IMPORTANT INFORMATION ON MY PUBLISHED VERSION! · 12:52am Dec 20th, 2022

Okay, so it occurs to me that, while I have run a few updates for book one, and I am currently writing the second book assuming those updates went through, you may not have updated your e-book to the current version. Kindle does not automatically push out those updates to you all, so if you want the most up-to-date version, you'll need to manually update the book yourself.

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Dec
20th
2018

Forgive me, for I have sinned... · 2:01am Dec 20th, 2018

So, just so you guys know, because of how hard it is for me to put out a reading of What I've Become on YouTube (I'm working on it, I just hate editing audio files with a passion, so it's taking me a while), I've been publishing some of the chapters of the story on the HFY! subbreddit in the hopes that I could get more people to read my story.

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Aug
7th
2018

Hey, just about done with the first book. · 11:14am Aug 7th, 2018

Yeah, I know I've posted this before, and I know you guys are chomping at the bit for something to read. It's not quite finished yet, though, and could use a look over from eyes that aren't mine. However, there's a slight catch to that. This isn't some work of fanfiction anymore, and as such, I really don't know if it's a good idea to throw it up for public editing before a real, for money publication.

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Jun
20th
2018

Almost done! · 2:38am Jun 20th, 2018

So, I have some good news, guys! The first book, the first publish ready book, is done. As in, I've got a completed book that still needs to be edited. Like, severely edited, but the whole thing is there. I'll be editing it over the next couple of weeks, and hopefully you guys will be able to see something tangible before the beginning of July! Thank you guys again so much for all your help, I really do appreciate it.

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Apr
24th
2018

Hey, the first part is done! · 2:51pm Apr 24th, 2018

Hey, gang! I've completed the first "part" of the new, copyright-friendly What I've Become! Now, this is only the first draft, sort of a proof of concept, to see how well the idea carries when it's not being held up by MLP.

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Dec
2nd
2014

The Sequel is out! · 2:00am Dec 2nd, 2014

So, just so you know, the sequel to What I've Become is out! Please go read it. You'll make fluttershy happy!
Anyway, I had originally put up a short chapter informing you all of this, but the moderators took it down. Sorry!
Anyway, you can find it here.

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Nov
26th
2014

NEW CHAPTER! and the end of a story arc. NO! · 5:11pm Nov 26th, 2014

Anyway, as the title suggests, I have finished the next, and last, chapter of What I've Become.

This is not the end of the story, however. It is just Book One.

Keep an eye out for the sequel. I will post another chapter in What I've Become to point to the next book in the series, so you guys can be alerted to the new story, just so those of you who are following just my story, but not me, know when I post it.

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Nov
25th
2014

Um... Oops... · 5:33pm Nov 25th, 2014

So, I just realized that I was using the name of someone else's OC in this story, so I changed his name to something else. The character in question is Captain Steel Song, and he originally appeared in Viking ZX's The Dusk Guard. I sincerely apologize to him for accidentally ripping him off, and I hope you guys can forgive me as well.

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Nov
14th
2014

I FIGURED IT OUT! · 3:27am Nov 14th, 2014

Hey guys, after a lot of thought, I finally figured out what was missing! to those of you who threw out your suggestions, thanks a ton for everything. it really helped me get my head back into the game.

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Nov
13th
2014

New chapter, but there's a catch. · 8:46pm Nov 13th, 2014

Well, I've *finished* the next chapter for What I've Become, but I'm really not sure if I'm happy with what I'm doing with it. I've sent it to my prereaders, but only one has gotten back to me with anything. I still think it's missing something.

What do you guys think? do you want me to release it now, so you can throw me suggestions? Or do you want me to wait until I'm able to figure out whats missing? Please tell me what you think:pinkiehappy:

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Nov
10th
2014

Edit to What I've Become. · 11:08pm Nov 10th, 2014

I've done a minor edit to the story. In chapter XI, Celestia and Luna receive a letter from Twilight. I removed it, since it was pretty unnecessary and only made Alex feel a bit Mary Sueish. As I've stated before, I'm trying to avoid that. You can learn about what happened in ponyville later.:pinkiehappy:

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Oct
30th
2014

hmm... impatient. · 9:20pm Oct 30th, 2014

So, I'm impatient, and only one of my prereaders have returned any feedback. True, it hasn't even been a full day, but I'm a loser and I know it. Anyway, I'm just gonna post the next chapter. Enjoy!

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Oct
30th
2014

So, new chapter to What I've Become! · 5:54pm Oct 30th, 2014

So, I've finished the next chapter for What I've Become, just waiting for it to come back from my prereaders. Expect more awesome in the very near future!

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Oct
10th
2014

So... I think I mis-tagged the story... · 12:03am Oct 10th, 2014

Well, as you guys know, I first wrote What I've Become when I had a huge case of writer's block. Now, nine chapters in, I'm starting to think that I mis-tagged the story.

The biggest mis-tag was the Tragedy tag, but I already took care of it.

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Sep
24th
2014

Tragedy tag for What I've Become. · 3:31pm Sep 24th, 2014

Okay, so a lot of people have been confused by the tagging that I've put for my story, so I'm going to clarify some things, as well as remove the Tragedy tag on my story.
The Tragedy tag was there not because something terrible is going to happen, but because something terrible has already happened. I originally wanted to use the sad tag, but comedy and sad are apparently incompatible according to the fimfiction moderators, so go figure.

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Sep
19th
2014

Thanks for the input! · 10:23am Sep 19th, 2014

After listening to the many great points you have given me, as well as all the intelligent, thoughtful comments you all had to give, I've decided not to do the sequel idea, and instead just go straight into chapter VII.

No, it isn't ready yet. I still need to write it as well as a few other chapters for my other stories first, plus I'm in college, so my studies come first.

but keep your eyes peeled! I just might surprise you!

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Sep
18th
2014

IMPORTANT! I need input for What I've Become! · 9:27pm Sep 18th, 2014

So, I was reading through the comments, and somepony brought up a very valid point. Both users Zarek and Asheram expressed that this point in the story would be a perfect place to end this story. Asheram also suggested that he would like to see a sequel, so here's my delema.

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