Added an extensive scene between Celestia and Discord in Chapter 1.

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Argh. Now that I've gone and published the first chapter of the thing, I realize that the entire first section of "Traitor" still reads like it's trying to be a quick plot synopsis, which is where I was going with it originally before I realized that doing so was making it dry and unreadable. So now I need to expand the first chapter, as if it isn't annoying enough that this was supposed to be a 3,000 word prologue to "No Escape From Yourself" and it is turning into a 18,000 word story (and

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