Hey everyone. I'm not sure how many of you are reading Dreams of Loss, but I'm having issues with what I have written on chapter eight. I'm working on my third rewrite of that chapter. There's just something about the pacing of it that bothers me, and it doesn't feel right to separate it into two chapters.

I'm probably being too critical of myself to be honest. My beta reader says that it's coming along fine, but I don't know.

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