Below is the first seventh or so of a story I just finished the first draft of. I haven't actually read it yet. So far my impression is that there's potential here, but it'll need a lot of revision. I want to write a version of around 5000-10,000 words so I can try to market it as a short story. This version includes too much of people saying "gosh, there are important implications!" to each other, followed by an action scene out of nowhere in the Seoul subway system, so it should be

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