An Old MFAB Second Chapter Draft · 6:47am Jun 12th, 2020
You know, I never continued Magical Filly Apple B, and I suspect I never will, but I do have a fair amount of an old draft lying around for the second chapter.
I remember I really felt like I needed to go through and revise Twist's familiar's accent, as it was getting rather out of control. I was having trouble with Twist's lisp, a bit, too.
Diamond's minion... would probably have been controversial. I still rather like it.