Man, did you ever go back and just... cringe at what you did before? That happened to me with Fool's Gambit. The story has plenty of potential, that's not the problem. My problem is with how it's written. The prose is off, there are numerous errors, and I feel like the whole thing is rushed. Like, that first part could have easily been 4-5 chapters longer, and it would have been better for it, since I'd have more room to really flesh out Shadow Heart, and really sell her snapping like

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Well, as promised, I finally got around to updating Fool's Gambit. I know that it took me some time, and many of you are wondering "why the heck is he working on this garbage instead of Nautilus or What I've Become?"
The answer is that I cannot control my muse, and that I write these stories not for fame, but because I enjoy writing, and I really need the practice if I'm going to be designing and creating video games.

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Well, after much thought, and careful planning, I have come out with another chapter for Fool's Gambit. Don't worry, I still haven't forgotten The Nautilus Protocol, I just have a little bit of writer's block in that area, and I'm working on getting it out of the way.

I already know what to do, I just need to formulate it coherently.

That being said, keep an eye open. I may post something within the next couple of days, or it may take me a week to finish this bad boy.

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Hey guys! I just finished another chapter for "Fool's Gambit"! be sure to tell me what you think!