I've been thinking about the new story I posted. Should I make another chapter, or end it there?

My mom's off my case. Good, although still mad at her. Umm, what else? Oh, yeah. I posted a new story. Here's the link. Umm, I went to McDonalds and noticed a few things. The Celestia doll was pink, the crown on the box was wrong, and there was no Applejack. So, go check out the story. Seriously, Go. Spread the word.