I'll just post the email here. SPOILERS for How Equestria Was Made:

Feo Takahari:

Thank you for submitting "How Equestria Was Made" to Equestria Daily. I found a lot to like here, but I have a couple of questions I want to pose. I'll ask you please to think about these questions, see if they're anything you want to address with a little rewriting, then resubmit the story as "back from Mars" through the regular story submission process.

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This is going to be a relatively rambling piece, inasmuch as it reflects some very rambling thoughts. Still, I do think there's some value in getting it all out. (Also, you probably shouldn't read this unless you've read or don't want to read How Equestria Was Made.)

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