I totally forgot · 11:26pm Aug 5th, 2023
To mark this as a "sequel" to the original story. So, if you're in the mood for more TD/Comet...
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/515715/the-eventual-daughter-of-a-non-brony
To mark this as a "sequel" to the original story. So, if you're in the mood for more TD/Comet...
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/515715/the-eventual-daughter-of-a-non-brony
So I did it. I published the edited, improved chapters of the Chrysalis arc of Life of a Non-Brony. I hope you guys like it more. I know I do. No leaps of logic, no dumb OOC moments. I think it's better. As requested, I have the original chapters linked in the story author's notes. I hope you guys like it more.
Frankly...
and everyone tells me this...
It sucks.
A lot.
Not the beginning. The beginning is good. Chrysalis kidnaps his family for revenge and all that. Makes sense for the story and her character. Him going into a rage to protect them because no, he's never really worked through the trauma of losing his entire family on Earth, then his Equestrian family is in mortal danger... that part is fine.
In this case, Life of a Non-Brony!
I have no idea why people don't get notified about my stuff anymore.
Yep! I finally wrote a new chapter of The Life of a Non-Brony! Yay! I warn you, it's not very pleasant, but I think you all gathered that from how the last one ended. It's nice and long, too, (clocking in at almost 11,500 words) so don't worry about having to wait almost a year for a 3000 word chapter. It's off to my pre-readers now, so I hope to have it out very soon.
But yeah, it's kind of a doozy. Really dark. Stick with it, though.
Yep. I finally finished the new chapter of Life of a Non-Brony! And there was much rejoicing. Should be out tomorrow, once my editors are done with it.
So, my big problem with updating Life of a Non-Brony is that I didn't know where to take the next chapter. I thought I had enough material for a full chapter, but then I realized that I should have tacked on the next chapter to the end of the last one. So to make up for that, and the wait, I'm going to be working on Life of a Non-Brony for a while. I'm releasing the next two chapters at once. I hope to have those out very soon. I've already finished the next one. The next story arc is...
So, many of you rightfully pointed out that I didn't really go into much of the budding relationship between Cheerilee and TD and Comet. I decided to rectify that by adding some more details to the chapter in which they adopt her. Hopefully this is a little better.
Updated chapter here.
Traditional cute pony pic.
The new chapter of Life of a Non-Brony! Yes, after nine weeks, I finally finished it. Woo hoo! Should be out later today.
So I have a conundrum regarding The Life of a Non-Brony.
So the story details the rest of TD's life, right? But the thing is, he's not the only one in the story growing older. Everypony is too. Why is that a problem for me?
Shipping.