So, a clop-fic with babs and bloom thats obviously going to be a little funny? Sure why not! *one hour later* OH GOD THESE FEELS! Seriously, one of the best things ive ever read on this site was just so shocking...I genuinely have no words right now! The main thing sticking out though is the pacing, it was so perfectly paced from start to finish, a few grammar errors or little things like that was just blown over! I was too deep into the story to even care! ....so looking at my first story, my

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So after reading about the fimfiction editorial and a comment on my most popular story, I thought id try my hand at analyzing my work.

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Dusty's tale is (nearly) at an end, so I want to get a general response for my first fully finished story. Did I keep it entertaining? Was I too obvious? Did I do generally well? What do you the readers think?