A Spot of Revision · 9:50pm Dec 17th, 2013
After three months:
Of thinking, I've gone in and rewritten the last strophe of my epyllion "The Laughter and the Night" in an attempt to address the usual reaction to the ending--"it seemed kinda rushed," most folks say. It's a good deal closer now to what I had in mind, but I'll hafta do some more thinking, I think...
Mike