Wow! 300 thumbs up for Hunted! I truly can't believe how much this story has been accepted by this amazing community. When I first made this after being inspired by Going Somewhere...? by trevordark, I was just blown away by how much attention that this story received. Even more so when the revision of it was completed. Now, it's become my top story.

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Hey guys,

So the revision of the first chapter is taking a bit longer than I expected it would. I'll hopefully get it up within a day or so. Thought I'd post this first so you guys can absorb some of the new ideas that I have created for it and give me some feedback. Here are just two of the ideas I've already put in. Note: If you don't want to read the ideas, you don't have to.

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Seeing as how many people have said Hunted could use some revising, I've decided to make it happen. The ETA on it can't be determined right now due to my work hours increasing this week, but I'll try to at least get the revised edition of the first chapter up asap. Note that I'll be going into much further detail behind the reason Anon is immune to the Dazzlings' songs, his "shop class incident". The addition of a few more events in between the cafeteria and the big confrontation is

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Lately, I've been thinking I could have done better with Hunted, especially the first two chapters. So I might just rewrite the story. Same ending of course, but maybe add a few more different events or confrontations, particularly in the chase chapter. But I want to know what ya'll think of the idea before I decide on whether or not to do it. Should I rewrite the story or leave it as it is?