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Microstory IX - The Existence · 8:58am Dec 8th, 2018

Before Twilight could say anything, Pinkie held up her hoof.

"Twilight, stop, before you say anything. I have to say something!"

Silence followed.

"What were you going to say?"

"...I forgot."

"Pinkie... what are you doing on my doorstep?"

"Twilight, you have to help me with my application!"

"What's this?" She held the documents up. "These look like job... rejections?"

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Problems and Fixes · 12:01pm Jan 17th, 2018

Hi all, first thing, thanks for reading Hell Yeah and leaving your wonderful feedback for this story.

Because of the feedback I've gotten I've been deliberating the dilemma of pursuing a sequel versus fixing current problems in the story. The current problem(s) highlighted to me were these:

1. The ending was rushed and as a result it got convoluted and suffered mechanically.

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