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Jul
11th
2021

Second Person but you are a named character? · 9:18am July 11th

I am working on a second-person story, but 'you' are a named character. In the story, you are Lyra Heartstrings, with three humans getting intimate with you. It's a very simple story. No Anon/human in sight. Plus, you are the pony getting made love to.

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Jan
14th
2017

Shall I keep using Anon? · 12:53pm Jan 14th, 2017

Do you think I shall keep using the Anon, second person stories format?

Or should I try challenge myself by not using Anon and second person a little more? Not to abandon Anon completely, just use him less.

Personally, I like using Anon. He's my Lego Brick Character and I can put him in ridiculous situations easily. Granted, that sounds lazy, but I just find Anon very funny in general.

Report Bendy · 390 views · #Anon #second person
Sep
2nd
2016

Wow Thanks! · 11:12pm Sep 2nd, 2016

Okay, wow thanks! Seriously, thanks for following and for favoriting A Bitter Sweet Surprise. I honestly didn't expect much of a reaction from it. I really didn't. I just wrote it because of how much I've enjoyed the Sour Sweet Stories that Nico-Stone Rupan has put out for us. Naturally I fell in love with the idea of Sour becoming a mom, and I followed that line of thought until I had written about four pages.

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Oct
7th
2015

And Back On The Hump I Go (And New Story Sneak Peek) · 3:28pm Oct 7th, 2015

Except not really.

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Jun
30th
2019

First Person Second · 3:44pm Jun 30th, 2019

I have noticed significant number of people cannot get past the use of second person. After consulting with a mod, I have decided to add a chapter at the end of my stories that will be the entire story reformatted to be in first person. As I work through my posted works, I will update the descriptions to reflect this. I'll list the stories here as I do so.

Calm and Collected

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Oct
26th
2016

My First Good Story in a While: Feeling That Way · 11:13pm Oct 26th, 2016

Today, I wrote my first serious story in a long while. An hour of that was spent on the second-to-last paragraph. But I came up with the concept and landscape picture about a year and a half ago. I'd appreciate if you could tell me you think I did. Thanks, and have a great day!

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Nov
24th
2015

Second Person Perspective · 5:34pm Nov 24th, 2015

I tried my hoof at second person present tense in my newest story, Tending the Roses, and I think the experiment came out rather well.

Lemme know what everypony thinks!!

~Noir :heart:

Jun
25th
2021

The Use of Anon Lazy? · 5:31am June 25th

I find myself agreeing with this. (There has been some talk about this recently in the Human in Equestria group) Don't get me wrong, he's useful for funny one-shots and short sex stories. Yes, I Bendy lord of trashy Anon Second Person fics knows they are trash.

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Dec
19th
2018

Sunset Shimmer Story I've Been Working On For About A Year Now. Still Not Finished · 6:00pm Dec 19th, 2018

I'm determined to get it finished. I give this passion; biggest reason why it's taking me so long to finish it. But, I'm willing to give you all a nice sizable taste of how it reads, or ones that follow along with me on this journey.

Please, enjoy what I have for now and happy holidays! :twilightsmile:

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May
2nd
2020

Work in progress · 11:40pm May 2nd, 2020

I’m starting work on a second person multiple chapter romance series called New Life With. Currently I’m writing the first one titled New Life With: Vinyl Scratch.

Each one of these stories I write will be a second person romance of the reader (Anonymous) and the character for that story I.e. twilight sparkle, Rainbowdash, spitfire etc.

Any advice or help from fellow second person human x pony writers is greatly appreciated (considering this is my first try 😂)

Nov
14th
2019

New story coming out tomorrow! · 1:30am Nov 14th, 2019

So Low Roar's new album just came out this month, and there's this one song I'm absolutely hooked on. It's beautifully sad. So I made a story about it.

It's a bit rough in spots that I'm hoping to refine up until I publish it, but I hope you enjoy it! I'll be publishing it around 1PM tomorrow!

Nov
14th
2019

Blue Eyes is now live! · 6:11pm Nov 14th, 2019

Inspired by this song.

Wanted to challenge myself by writing a story in a short time span. It was fun!

EBlue Eyes
Quit looking at me with those goddamn blue eyes. I love them.
I Am The Night · 3.6k words  ·  35  2 · 1.1k views
Aug
13th
2016

Massive Update! And I really, really need your opinion [VOTE BELOW IN COMMENTS] · 12:42am Aug 13th, 2016

Role Reversal can sometimes be the hardest to write for. It's because of Rarity's voice and mannerisms. I sometimes have to stop and go "That doesn't sound right" when it's coming out of Rarity's mouth and re-do entire parts of the story. Fluttershy, Rainbow Dash, Twilight, Applejack, and Pinkie Pie were easy because it's easy for me to get into their head. Rarity is another pickle altogether. I had trouble with Freudian Slip and I've had trouble with Role Reversal.

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Dec
2nd
2015

Call Them Fishes (Story Updates) · 12:15am Dec 2nd, 2015

Call 'em fishes because they're of-fishial!

Eh? Eh? Nothing? Alright then, no jokes...

Anyway guys, here I will announce official mini-series and stories to come in the near future and in 2016! Now don't be confused, I'm not releasing a schedule since Lord knows I won't be able to live off that stuffs. With that, I'll be confirming four future projects I'll be submitting!

1) The Dance

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Jun
8th
2016

Sad story finished today or tomorrow · 6:13pm Jun 8th, 2016

So, for anyone who actually enjoyed or at least had feels with When You Least Expect It, you'll be happy to know that I've almost finished its one-part sequel. I was tempted to do it in two parts and, you know, I may tack on an additional bit if the mood strikes me. But as of now it's looking like it'll be maybe 5k words, will have mild sexual content (enough to have an M tag, but nothing too far), and will give you a

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May
9th
2019

A new, sexy, sad, Berry Punch story is now here! · 8:55pm May 9th, 2019

Picture, very unfortunately, unrelated. :(

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May
31st
2019

Another 2nd Person Monster Mare Story Idea... · 4:35am May 31st, 2019

In case it hasn't been extremely obvious by now, I have more than a few ideas for some stories running around in my head at the moment. It also probably isn't a secret by now that I am starting to enjoy writing both 2nd Person stories and stories involving monster mares.

Now recently another idea popped into my head and I thought I would just share it and see how many of you like it as well as receive some feedback on it.

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Nov
21st
2018

Second Person & Anon · 3:13pm Nov 21st, 2018

Does anyone else have trouble with second person stories? I have nothing against the stories themselves, or the authors who write them, but I have significant trouble reading them. First person stories I don't read very often (though I don't see them often either), and I'm definitely a 3rd person/3PO (not the droid) story writer and reader. I just cannot grok 2nd person stories for more than half a chapter before I set them down. I hate that, too, because there have been some stories I've been

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Oct
4th
2020

Handling Points of View with Grace · 6:15am Oct 4th, 2020

I’m pretty sure that all of you have read more than one story in your life, and I’d bet that most of you noticed that stories can be told from a variety of perspectives. If you prefer a somewhat fancier term, such a perspective can be also called a point of view (POV for short). Types of POVs, their usage, and common pitfalls are what’s this miniguide going to be about. Just like in case of the guides previously published here (and archived in my blogs), this is meant primarily for beginners

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Feb
15th
2017

On Common Ground is Live Today (All Dat Berry Punch Tho) · 8:12pm Feb 15th, 2017

She's so cute, isn't she? Would be a shame if something were to happen to her...

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