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Jan
15th
2020

I HAVE FOUND A PLOT HOLE IN COLD.... AND IT BUGS ME!!!!! · 6:04am January 15th

So, I'm doing an MLPFiM marathon, and I watched the season 4 premiere. Now, for some odd reason, My brain didn't realize that the Everfree would invade once Queen Chrysalis took the elements from the tree. I mean, we don't see it happen again until the tree is destroyed. THIS NOW BOTHERS ME. We don't really have a solid time period for how long the tree was gone without the elements, and I don't really have a solid time period of when Cold takes place, so therefore; I can't tell how much magic

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Jan
16th
2017

Updates to "Wooing" · 10:48am Jan 16th, 2017

So today I uploaded two chapters to "The Wooing of Sunset Shimmer". However, to me, it's still Sunday. I haven't been to bed yet. I get these spells where 36 hours will pass before my brain says "Sleep, you foolish girl."

So, today - or when it's Monday to me, so probably late afternoon or early evening - I'll finally reveal the two gifts we really care about; The first gifts Sunset and Twilight give each other.

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Dec
18th
2019

10 Unresolved Lingering Plot Threads/Plot Holes from FiM · 12:27am Dec 18th, 2019

As much as MLP’s finale wrapped very well. Plus considering the series finale we got this year, a show about pastel color pone did why did better then Game of Thrones and Star vs. the Forces Evil did with their finale, in my opinion of course. Considering how many plots thread it had to wrap up here throughout the series, it huge kudos turn out the way it did and not feel rushed. However, there were a few plot threads that manage to slip through the cracks, sadly. From threads that were meant

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Sep
5th
2015

Don't you just HATE that? · 4:37pm Sep 5th, 2015

So I just completed writing and editing several future scenes for Equestrylvania. I'm feeling pretty good about myself, and get started on the scene that would connect them all so I can finally start publishing more chapters, and then

then

goddammit

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Mar
24th
2017

Sunset Shimmer Goes to Hell now on accelerated publication schedule · 3:24am Mar 24th, 2017

A few unsavory plot holes got in the way of me publishing earlier, but I've cleared them all out.

The final draft is complete.

I will be publishing the the remaining nine chapters over the next two weeks. Following that, I will publish the short-story epilogue/sequel, Prance, in short order.

Keep an eye on your FimFiction feed for notifications!


And feel free to comment.

Mar
1st
2018

What Do You Like And Don't Like; Shattered Rainbow Rock · 11:48pm Mar 1st, 2018

I am curious. What is it about Shattered that you guys like about it? What positives do you have? What negatives do you have? Something you think that needs to be looked into some more that I should do? Maybe something that could have been taken out completely?

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Aug
12th
2017

Plot Holes and EQG part 1 · 6:21pm Aug 12th, 2017

Hi kids, while we await for my editors to finish the latest chapter

That's right, work Slaves! Work, Muhahahaha!!!!!!!!

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Aug
10th
2017

Status Update 8/10/17 · 4:58am Aug 10th, 2017

Just finished the second chapter of my Changing Seasons contest entry. It...kinda went off the rails a bit from what my initial plan for it was, but that's fine. I'm sure the fact that I'm at about 5.6k out of a 10k max word count and only halfway through the story won't be a pain in the butt at all. :pinkiecrazy:

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Jul
26th
2020

My Episode Review on My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic-Daring Doubt · 9:21pm July 26th

Bueno Dias, my friends.

This is your friendly film, TV show, and episode reporter here with another review.

Today, for my 34th episode analysis, I'm gonna give you guys my take of "Daring Doubt". The 21st episode in the ninth season of "My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic" to be precise.

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