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Dec
16th
2015

DELETED SCENE(Sweetie Belle's small problem) · 3:43am Dec 16th, 2015

At first I wanted to solve the situation between the cmc as quickly as possible and allow AB and Scootaloo come into the supporting roles they began as but that would be shortcutting a lot of character development plus story. So I opted to remove this from the latest chapter.

"So, you gonna tell us what Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon have you or not?" Applebloom asked in a slightly annoyed tone.

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Jan
29th
2016

DELETED SCENE(Sweetie Belle's small problem) · 6:28am Jan 29th, 2016

You know, it pained me to remove this due to me having planned this reunion scene since the time travel portion of the fic but in the end, adding her into the story again by this point is not really needed due to the fact that Sweetie Belle after has a wide cast of support characters.

"You know, your looking really nervous right now. You should lay off the caffeinated drinks." A calm but nerdish voice said.

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Nov
13th
2016

Scaleless alterations and deleted scenes. pt. 2 · 4:10am Nov 13th, 2016

So folk want to know what's gotten cut or altered during the course of 'Friendship is Scaleless' up to now. While no doubt this list is nowhere near complete as I'll no doubt continue to change things as time goes on, hopefully this gives some insight as to how my thought process and reaction to reader commentary works towards producing each chapter:

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Nov
13th
2016

Apologizes for the delayed chapter + a deleted scene · 6:07am Nov 13th, 2016

I've been distracted these past few weeks by one thing or another (including the USA elections), and as a result suffered a bit of writer's block. Also, I wrote a whole segment featuring Luna visiting Mabel's dream, and was working on her visiting the others--when one of my editors, MyOwnNameWasTaken, made me realize that those scenes were adding nothing but unneeded drag to the story. As Mabel's dream was the only scene finished, I'm

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Mar
22nd
2017

The More Things Change Deleted Scenes: PROLOGUE and INTRODUCTIONS · 9:47pm Mar 22nd, 2017

As a kid, I always really liked watching deleted scenes and commentary tracks on movies. Even today, I really like seeing where stories could have gone and what kind of things could have happened to them. So, as I write the Equiforce series, I'll expand on each chapter in the comments and display deleted scenes on my blog.

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Jan
21st
2016

Another deleted scene from "Sweetie Belle's Small problem" · 6:45am Jan 21st, 2016

This was removed due to the fact that while I loved the idea of a secret all teenage pony club hidden right under the residents noises, it literally added nothing to the overall plot of the story and I doubt I would ever came back to this location in my fic again so in the end, I decided to remove it.

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Jan
29th
2016

DELETED SCENE(Sweetie Belle's small problem)(Rude Rarity) · 9:50am Jan 29th, 2016

"And no funny business." The unicorn added much to the chagrin of Scootaloo whom blushed heavily and gave her an offended glare.

"The buck do you take me for?! She just tried to-" Scootaloo began to snap only to see the wide grin on Rarity's face and scowled upon realizing it was a bad joke. "Not… Cool." Scootaloo said hotly before she resumed trotting up the stairs.

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Oct
11th
2016

Update on first Chapter and a deleted Scene · 6:21am Oct 11th, 2016

Still working on the first chapter - work has been slow, especially since it is sometimes hard to decide between things to keep and to remove completely, because they do not fit into the "flow". I hope I made the right decision with the last thing I changed.

Still, the scene I deleted contained a nice theory. I don't want to remove it completely, so I will just post it here:

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Mar
30th
2017

IRL Update and DELETED SCENES: A Slow Start. · 1:53am Mar 30th, 2017

So, I finally got a job! I'm a factory worker at Imfac making brake lines and cables, which is boring, but I can do it and it pays money. I'm really happy I can finally be a functional adult again. Thanks for those of you who said you were praying for me, and anyone who just thought nice things about me. I really can't express how glad I am to have something. You may remember back in January that I

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Aug
21st
2015

Deleted... Chapter? ("Deep Blue, Part 2") · 12:57am Aug 21st, 2015

It's true! There really was a deleted chapter! Or, that is to say, a pretty different version of "Deep Blue, Part 2." After writing it and having my editor take a look at it, I decided it needed some heavy rewrites. Since a lot of it is the same, I won't post it all here; it would be tedious to look through and compare. Instead, I'll post some differences followed by a large scene that was cut entirely.

Changes:

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Apr
19th
2019

Behind the scenes of my stories · 6:56pm April 19th

Not everything makes it in the published story. That's why I created this list of my non-mature stories and their GDocs of remains (first drafts, deleted scenes, etc.):

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Mar
5th
2018

Additional Story Notes/Deleted Scenes: Spring Comes to Snow Hill · 3:02am Mar 5th, 2018

Now that we got all the vocabulary and tech out of the way in the last blog post, here's some more behind-the-scenes stuff for Spring Comes to Snow Hill.


Source

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Jun
21st
2017

Deleted Scene from "The Iron Horse" Ch. 62 - "Be Cool, It's the Fuzz" · 8:36pm Jun 21st, 2017

The following is a scene from the latest chapter of The Iron Horse, "Television Rules the Nation." This scene expands on the brief scene in the Everfree Forest with the teleportation jump tower being set up by the TechQuestrian personnel under cover of night, but in this version, the Royal Guard spot the tower and investigate.

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Nov
17th
2018

A Look Behind the Scenes: Supervillian Flu · 7:21pm Nov 17th, 2018

Here's a special behind-the-scenes look at my writing process! This episode, we're covering the final chapter of The Supervillain Flu, as well as some deleted scenes from earlier chapters.

For those who are interested, the following are my unedited "jot these down so I remember later what I want to write" notes on the chapter (I suggest not reading this until after you've read the chapter, as it does not just contain spoilers, it is spoilers distilled):

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Feb
20th
2016

Deleted Scene from The King's Gift · 8:29pm Feb 20th, 2016


(image by Pixel_Spark)

A bit that was written but cut from the story's final version as it didn't advance the plot's romance. Enjoy!

“It is good to be back!” Captain Iron Blade said in pleasure at the sight of the triple gate at the entrance to the road that led to the Crystal Empire.

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Feb
15th
2016

Welcome to Fanfiction! - [Outtakes, Extras, and Deleted Scenes!] · 3:35pm Feb 15th, 2016

Dec
27th
2017

In which Displaced Into Nothing turns into an author diatribe against the meat industry... · 3:28am Dec 27th, 2017

So...
This was unintentional...

I sat down to write just the very beginning of the next chapter, while it was fresh in my mind, and what came out could easily be mistaken for...

Vegan Propaganda?

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Oct
27th
2015

Milestones and Deleted Sketch! · 5:38am Oct 27th, 2015

Milestones abound! "The Iron Horse" has gone over 800 comments, 34,500 total views, and has gotten to over 200,000 words! Just wanted to say thanks to everyone who's been enjoying the story. Also, from the most recent chapter, here's an unused sketch Green was working on for me. We ended up not using it because it was supposed to be Twilight in the scene with Turing, but I still happen to think Gadget looks pretty cute in it. We might end up properly finishing it at some point.

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Sep
20th
2015

Another deleted scene from "Sweetie Belle's Small problem" · 8:04am Sep 20th, 2015

My thoughts for this scene was to give this fic a serious tone but after some thought, I don't want it to take this direction as it would be depressing as fuck. :rainbowwild:

"But I'm not a colt!" Sweetie Belle nearly shrieked at the Alicorn.

Upon hearing this, Twilight sighed aloud. "I guess we'll be adding therapy to the list of things we need to cover." Twilight remarked aloud dismally.

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Sep
24th
2015

Yet another deleted scene to "Sweetie Belle's small problem" · 10:44am Sep 24th, 2015

I find myself struggling with this fic alot and part of the reason why is that I am dealing with pure slice of life set-up here and that's always been a weak-spot for me in my writing. Anyways, this scene was removed because i didn't want Sweetie Belle's secret to revealed to anypony else at the present time.

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