Hey again. Chapter 16 of Lunaverse: Galaxy Rangers - The White Raven is finished. Okay, I admit I play the level of technology in this universe pretty fast and loose like the show does. Despite everything, this fic is still basically a cartoon. That is why Trixie was able to survive being exploded back in the first story or gets her head banged into a desk for little effect. Whatever works for a gag. Anway, I hope you enjoy the chapter.

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Hello again. The sixth chapter of Lunaverse: Galaxy Rangers - The White Raven is done. I wasn't actually planning on making this chapter like this at first. But with Vinyl's attack, I needed a follow-up. So I thought "Why not have Pokey do some investigating and that could lead into Notary getting her powers?" It also helped build up Notary character as well. This version of Notary is a bit different from the Lunaverse one and is inspired by the Terminator. I really like creepy, silent

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Hey again. Chapter 23 of Lunaverse: Galaxy Rangers - The White Raven is finished. The story is slowly starting to wrap up. I think it should be done at chapter 30 or so. With an epilogue of course. As I said before, I will write a side story or two before moving on to part 3 that will wrap up the Corona saga. Raindrops will play a big part in it. I think I finally found a good place for her in the series. Anyway, I hope you enjoy the chapter.

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Chapter 19 of Lunaverse: Galaxy Rangers - The White Raven is finished. I have been thinking that I might write one or two one-shots after I finish this story. I have some big ideas for the third part and there are some things I want to explore before doing it. One idea I want to do is a story where Lyra and Bon-Bon have their tenth anniversary of the day they met and hijinks ensue. I like writing their relationship and want to expand on it more. The other idea I won't say yet because it

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Hey again. Chapter 10 of Lunaverse: Galaxy Rangers - The White Raven is finished. This is one of my favorite chapters. I admit that maybe I didn't make Trixie broken up enough about losing her horn, so I hope this chapter can fix that. I really wish I had the opportunity to introduce Sleuth and Twilight in the story sooner. Since they are such important characters in the story after all. I just couldn't find the right moment to do so. Oh well. I hope you enjoy the chapter.

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Hey again. Chapter 13 of Lunaverse: Galaxy Rangers - The White Raven is finished. I've wanting to bring Fluttershy properly into the story for awhile. She's a mix of canon Flutters and Lunaverse Flutters. Shyer than canon, but not enough that it's debilitating. I like having the original Mane 6 appear in the background or have small supporting roles. Though I do admit they are more like their canon versions then the Lunaverse ones. I never really liked the level of hostility between the Luna 6

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Hey guys. Chapter 15 of Lunaverse: Galaxy Rangers - The White Raven is finished. Writing Zecora is so hard! Constant rhyming is so difficult and annoying to write. No wonder she barely shows up in the show. Usually when she appears in the story, I write a general idea of what I want her to say then some back later and contrive a rhyme for her later. I use a rhyme generator to help me out. It makes it a little easier. Still, not fun. Anyway, I hope you enjoy

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Another update! I should probably have the story done by the end of the month. Cross your fingers. I will at least try to work harder on it than usual and find more time to write it. I hope you enjoy the chapter.

Chapter 25

Chapter 3 of Lunaverse: Galaxy Rangers - The White Raven is done! Things really start hitting the fan this chapter. You might be wondering why I made Vinyl a bad guy in this story. The reason is I wanted to create a reverse Octavia/Lyra character. I thought that it might be interesting if Vinyl was with Greengrass instead of Octavia in this continuity. I like mixing things up like this and I find her a lot of fun to write. I also think she has a nice dynamic with Lyra. Oh, and yes this

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Happy new year! Chapter 14 of Lunaverse: Galaxy Rangers - The White Raven is finished. I worked hard to get this chapter out by the start of the new year. I hope you enjoy it. Here's to a new year and let it be a brighter and better one than the last.

Chapter 14

Hey again. Chapter 12 of Lunaverse: Galaxy Rangers - The White Raven is finished. I hope you like it. The first fight scene was super difficult to write. I had many ideas, but putting them to paper was difficult. I rewrote it several times. I had the idea of Trixie fighting an unmorphed Notary for a little bit, but I couldn't get it to work. Having Notary transform at the start actually made the whole thing easier. I think it all turned out pretty well when I was finally able to finish it.

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Hello again. Chapter 11 of Lunaverse: Galaxy Rangers - The White Raven is finished. It has been pointed out to me that Trixie has been taking what has been happening to her a little too well and I have been trying to work on that. I am not the most emotional writer. I have been trying to balance Trixie's emotional responses and the urgency and danger of the situation. I also really don't want to have chapters of Trixie moping. This might be a response to Fallout Equestria where Littlepip spent

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The final chapter of White Raven is finally finally done. Phew. It took forever to wrap up all the plot points in this story. Hard to believe I was able to get this far. Thank you to my faithful viewer for sticking with this silly story of mine. It had some ups and downs and some parts I am unsure of, but I am overall happy with how the story turned out. This chapter is one of my favorites. I love writing Luna and Trixie interacting with each other. I feel they learn a lot from each other. I am

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White Raven is finally finished! I'm so happy. I honestly thought I wouldn't get this far. More Galaxy Rangers is to come! Next will be a Lyra/Bon Bon side story. I am still not sure how many more side stories I want to do before part 3. I am thinking about doing a short one about Luna, but it is still in the rough planning stages. I also have an idea for one about Moondancer(Who is totally not Zizanie in disguise), but I am worried about it being too similar to

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Hello again. Chapter 9 of Lunaverse: Galaxy Rangers - The White Raven is finished. It surprises me just how much of a complete heel Night Light ended up being. I didn't intend for him to become this nasty. I think it works for the best, though. He is a great foil for Trixie. Next time, a certain lavender unicorn will finally make an appearance!

Chapter 9

Hey again. Chapter 5 of Lunaverse: Galaxy Ranger is finished. This chapter is a bit of an odd one. I didn't really plan for it, but it sorta came out when I started writing it. It works because I needed to build up the rivalry between Lyra and Vinyl who instantly hate each after only five minutes of meeting each other. The next chapter will be pretty crazy and it will reveal the identity of the last Planet Ranger, the Venus Ranger!

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Hey again. Chapter 4 of Lunaverse: Galaxy Rangers - The White Raven is done. I got the idea of Night Light being on the opposing Rangers from Rainbowdoubledash's story At the Grand Galloping Gala. In that story, Night Light blames Trixie for what happened back in Boast Busted and tries to make Trixie's life a living hell. I thought I might want to use that

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Hey again. Next chapter will be the final boss. For awhile I had thought hard about who should be the final boss of the story. I settled on Notary. After all, she is the one that has been antagonizing Trixie the whole story and she is Pokey's killer. It seemed appropriate. Fisher was my next choice, but I couldn't quite get it to work sadly. That is how the ball rolls sometimes. Oh well, it worked about in the end. I still can't believe this story is almost over with. I've

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Hey again. The first chapter of the sequel of my first Galaxy Rangers story is done. This time I will publish chapters when I finish them so don't expect chapters released every two days or so. The idea behind this story is that I wanted to do a Greengrass vs Luna 6 story and I wanted to do a story that addresses the Night Court. Unfortunately, the Bon-Bon plot point will be push aside for now. There just isn't room in this story. I hope you enjoy the fic.

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Hey again. Okay, I might have exaggerated about this chapter being about the final boss fight. Outing Notary as Pokey's killer took longer than I expected and I decided it would be for the best that Notary's fight should take up two chapters. Also, when I feel a chapter should end, I end it. Even if it wasn't the place I wanted to end the chapter. Or some reason, I lose all motivation to write past that point. Odd, but it tends to work out for the best. Anyway, I hope you

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