Celestia “Did you bring one of those orbs with you or not?!” her eyes show both fear and wrath.
I stare back. My reluctance to give her as little information as possible allows tension to flow between us. She shifts her weight a bit and turns to face me a bit more directly.

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There wasn't much to edit. I just wanted to add a bit more. I guess it's done for now but I think I'm going to extend celestias dialogue instead of just glossing over it. I've spent the last few days thinking of what I wanted to add to this given it's length.

1 year ago to the day, I started off a massive quest. I wanted to write this huge idea for a story. So it's officially my one year anniversary for my novel.
So I'm sitting here, looking over my last bit of story line and realizing I have about 50k words left before I finish my first novel (It's at 117k right now). It's my largest story by far and I'm rather proud of myself since it hasn't been until this last year that I sat down and finished something I started writing. This is so weird

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I know this chapter is kinda short, I ended up breaking it into two chapters. Should have 31 out in the next week or so since it's mostly done.

I did it I did it! Finished chapter 1 rewrite! Never again! I'm so sick of that damn chapter! I've rewritten it like...four times now? That's not including edit overhauls. Broke it into two parts because chapter 1 being 10,400 words is...uninviting. Ugh. I'm never touching it again. For the most part, I had way too many sentences that started with "I" like "I did this" or "I did that" so I reworded them as much as possible. There were also sentences that were unclear, or seemed...out of place.

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Kinda put off the next chapter. I had an old family friend take his life and I've been trying to be there for some of his family. Also my financial situation kinda got steamrolled. So with all the stress, I just haven't really sat down to finish the next chapter. Wanted to drop a line and apologize real quick.

Got two more chapters edited: 46 and 47.
As I suspected, the wording during the wedding party needed some sprucing up. Besides a few typos and some poor word choices, I didn't see much to change in either chapter. I might just say it's good now. I feel so bad for my fans on fanfiction.net. I like never get around to posting new chapters.

As I walk into the room, I see Luna with an elegant, light scarf, painted all shades of purple. The moon’s phases are depicted on it in black, from waning up to a full moon.
Celestia wears a shawl around her neck of a light rainbow, matching her equally radiant hair.
Princess Cadence wears a similar sized shawl but white, with yellow trimming.

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I got the chapter written but...I kinda wanna extend it a bit...please be patient! I know t's been a bit and I constantly fight the urge to give you all a little something even if it could be better.

Decided to start writing King of the Dead: One Woman Army, the prequel to KOTD.
It's how Lucretia went from being a disabled girl to one of the most reknown captains in the Taraskan army. Anyone know of some good groups who want a strong female character without the stereotypes?

Finally finished the first half of chapter 1 and broke it into two parts. I'm done with it, never touching it again. I'm so sick of that damn chapter. I've edited it, added to it, moved stuff around, deleted entire sections. I'm so sick of reading it. On the plus side, I still get that tense feeling when I read it as I follow the story. Unfortunately it made me publish part 2 of chapter 1 before it's been edited. Owell, maybe tomorrow.

After a decently eye-opening review, I'm going to be posting up one more chapter of KOTD, hen giving book one the last overhaul. There's a lot of tense issues and typos that microsoft word and myself didn't catch, as well as chapters that just...need more. I've been putting it off because reading all 142k words and editing them is exhausting. I may post up a random chapter or so while I'm doing this, but I don't plan to. Basically the deal is, when I first started writing, I had a "One chapter

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I've been adding bits and pieces to the newest chapter. Sorry, had a rough few weeks. Insomnia flared up for three consecutive which completely annihilated my schedule of crap I needed to do.

So chapter 30 has ended up being so long, I'm going to break it up into two chapters. I'll post chapter 30 in a few days, then wait a week before posting chapter 31 when it's ready.

I know I need to be working on the last half of chapter 32 but I took a small break and finally fixed a small issue that has been bugging me: the short description. So far, here are the two top contenders and I'd like to ask everyone who's familiar with the story to give me their feedback WITHOUT SPOILERS PLEASE. Those of you unfamiliar with the story, please tell me which one would make you the most likely to check out the story. I may combine them when finished.

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Son of a bitch, this chapter is on the edge of being done but so help me God crap keeps popping up. Like last three days I have slept like crap. Just can't think straight long enough to finish off the chapter.

I've been dividing my time between sprucing up previous chapters and writing the next one. It's going well so far, but man getting my brain to focus is hard. Also I keep getting ideas for scenes for future chapters. My gdoc of the story looks as disorganized as my room.

It's been one year since I got that horrible message that my best friend was dead, that he died in his sleep. Today I feel a bit of what I did then. I feel lost... Like I cannot find my way.
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I don't imagine i'll do much today, though I did finish a one shot he was excited to see done. So theres that...

I hope you all enjoy. And Dennis? No matter where you are, know I love you and miss you.

I hope you all enjoy.

Initially I was just going to put the second part of what was supposed to be chapter 30, but I gotta be honest it's probably going to be another two chapters. So expected chapters 31 and 32 sooner than usual.

Yes! Yes! *Rolls around on floor hugging story* Chapter 30 is turning out so well! There's so much deliciousness in here! My brain is just cranking stuff out!