Motivation · 5:40am Aug 4th, 2015
Noir de Plume is awesome. =]
-Soaring
Finally finished the next chapter of A Slave's Freedom. I've been having second, third, and fourth thoughts as to how I want this story to go, and I think I have the route planned out (in my head)! Hopefully all will go according to plan, and hopefully the story will be enjoyable for you all!
I'm kind of waiting for a pre-reader to pre-read before I post it, so that's why it's delayed. It's almost 3k words o_O.
Also, chapter title is a reference to someone in history. Take a guess!
M235 Final Tease!
Also that ending will be edited, but it's from the original! =] (No the fic isn't ending in 5 chapters. Pffft. We have a long way to go before this baby ends! =] )
CS:GO 100 win marker. That's a lot of wins.
Road to Master Guardian anyone?
I wrote a poem.
Mind if I share it?
I don't think I'll be able to turn it into a story, but here you go.
The poem is MarbleMac, so hopefully you're not tired of that.
Ready?
"M.H.M"
By Soaring
"Mhm," she said.
It was the first words he heard from her.
She sounded beautiful wherever she went.
She loved rocks, they were colorful in sight.
But she loved to dance with her grey coat.
So she danced all night long.
"Mhm," she said.
Wrote 4,000+ words in two or so hours (three if you count an hour in-between of writing on and off).
Crazy, right?
And I'm not even in the "he's in Equestria" yet. I'm mostly working on the world building and creative side of the story. It's got a lot of dialogue and not enough exposition (something I'll be fixing for sure). Hopefully this story will be one you'll remember, since it's dealing with a protagonist from Ancient Egypt.
I made you laugh in this chapter, and I think I made you ride the feels train at least twice in this bad boy.
Well...
I'll be getting some people to pre-read this before it goes up (that is, if it feels like it fits the story in its entirety), but put it this way...
Been a few nights, too.
Well, folks. The grind (metaphorically, meaning I had done it in my head, but the results don't match) has gone to a slow halt (story updates). It'll be like that for a long while, due to my college schedule, which is a total of eighteen credit hours, with books coming (not literally) out of my ass. Reading about Puritans right now, and I'm writing a response to seventy-two pages of comedic, yet informational prose on the subject. Good shit.
Got this idea to work with for the next chapter, which halts the progression of Sweetie Belle to transition to Levi's perspective.
However, it's not what you guys and gals are thinking...
>_<
We're definitely going to get a lot of his backstory out of this chapter.
Love this song. :D
Old Avatar is back so I can look more defiant and what not when I lurk in TWG!
Big Bad Soaring... really?
Also, I have fallen flat on writing again. Yep, the desire to write has finally been shot down with three different bazookas. Hoping to get back in the groove, but right now, my writing is atrocious and struggle.net is engaged.
Lastly, my internet sucks. My room has the worst internet. Rage engaged.
That's all [folks].
-Soaring
P.S.
Problem: gotta fix the rest of vernacular in the rest of the chapters. So far up to "Swimming Part 1" is in the correct vernacular. Will finish that soon boys and girls. The next chapter got a revamp because I have Leo being a bit different with his vernacular, but it'll be all right. Not to mention that the next chapter is very twisted. Poor Sophie.
He takes a deep breath. "Me guessin' ya wanna be findin' more about ya sis?"
Learned something interesting in class today, and I might want to share it with you. Well, that is, if it wasn't so controversial. Of course, me being me, I'm going to show you it anyway. Why not?
Sorry I can't remember the original title, past Soaring is an idiot and didn't post the original title.
We're still streaming and moving on to chapter 2!
-Soaring
Currently reading an essay written by Dillard on Black English Vernacular and its History, and I thought I'd share this paragraph:
Get hyped. Dark fic about Distant Shores...
Not EG mane six, but a humanized mane six. Might be fun to explore?
We'll see when It falls.
Also, in other news, I'm not healthy. In about thirty minutes, I'm going back to the dentist due to the spot where my wisdom tooth was (lower left). That spot is now infected. Been dealing with it the whole day, so I'd like to get it fixed. You know, swelling is a bit obvious when walking on campus.
>Right.
-Soaring
First off, thanks to Stars of Night for reading my recording her reading my story!
I'll be posting her youtube as well: link. Go subscribe! Tell 'er Soaring sent you!
Also, I'm livestreaming my reaction to it right now! Come join me! (I'll also be writing too!)
Been stressed out for a while. So I've been working on projects, too many of them to count. Instead of all of them, I'm just going to hone in on one in particular. It's weird, and it won't be released til it is finished, because I'm tired of releasing unfinished fics.
>So yeah, expect that before the thirty-first (of August).
Please... write this story. I can't write anymore; I gotta finish my other fics!
Kinda like to hear what my readers think of A Slave's Freedom so far. If you're wondering if my self-consciousness is appearing, it is not. Just more curious then anything (for those who are wondering what I'm meaning, I tend to get very worried over my writing). This is more of a, "Does this story still attract you despite how long its taking for them to get out of the gorge, or does it seem like it's dragging on?" type deal.
Also, new short bio.
M235 has gone through changes. Too many, I know. This second one was the worst change yet, and it wasn't even because it was more chapters. It felt shorter to most, the style that you guys subscribed to died in an instant, and well, lots of things I could go on and list happened that you all neither liked or didn't like. Honestly, looking at it now, I feel the same way. As I've developed as an author here on fimfic, I've changed my style drastically. Better or for worse? Not sure yet, but