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Jan
8th
2016

Re-re-editing Kingdom of Avia UPDATED · 6:55am Jan 8th, 2016

So the EQD rejection letter for KoA said the following:

"Right away, I'm seeing very unsteady perspective, repetitive word choice, unsubtle presentation of character emotion, obtrusive descriptions, lack of narration to set the scene during conversations at times, and repetitive sentence structure. The absolute rarity of paragraphs longer than two lines says you're probably not fleshing out the narration enough."

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Aug
20th
2015

Announcement: Kingdom of Avia · 3:54am Aug 20th, 2015

This week or next week I plan to write at least one more chapter (or maybe more) of Kingdom of Avia. So if I haven't written the next chapter ("Journey North", it will be called) by next Friday, feel free to start nagging me to do it, provided you keep your comments civil.

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Aug
26th
2015

Submitted Kingdom of Avia to EQD · 9:25pm Aug 26th, 2015

Like the title says, I submitted Kingdom of Avia to EQD. We'll see how this goes.

Notes from previous blog as well:

This week or next week I plan to write at least one more chapter (or maybe more) of Kingdom of Avia. So if I haven't written the next chapter ("Journey North", it will be called) by next Friday, feel free to start nagging me to do it, provided you keep your comments civil.

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Oct
4th
2015

New chapter of "Avia" is up! · 12:37am Oct 4th, 2015

I just finished writing the newest chapter of Kingdom of Avia. It's rather violent. Feel free to read it!

Aug
28th
2015

New chapter up! · 4:23pm Aug 28th, 2015

There's a new chapter of Kingdom of Avia up! It's called "Journey North". I hope to get the next chapter, which will be called "Skaydi" up soon as well, but I have classes starting next week, so I don't know how long exactly it will be til it's up.

Aug
27th
2015

Can anyone help with this non-answer I got from EQD?? · 8:23pm Aug 27th, 2015

Got a response on Kingdom of Avia from EQD- what am I supposed to do with this when they don't tell me the issues?

The email read:

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Jul
8th
2015

Strange idea- should I do it? · 10:03pm Jul 8th, 2015

Came up with this idea when I was half-asleep last night:

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May
21st
2016

Still on semi-hiatus, but... · 4:56am May 21st, 2016

The other night, I got a really good idea for some scenes to add to my KoA fanfic, so I'm going to unpublish the chapters that I plan to work on, and will re-publish them when the edits are done. Currently I'm focusing on making my "Trouble's Waking" and "Bounty Hunter" chapters a bit more dramatic, as well as exploring some of Goldfeather's backstory in those chapters.

I'm not sure when these edits will be done since I'm in class year round, but I'll let you know when I finish them.

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Jan
3rd
2016

Got rejected by EQD- which I find oddly amusing · 9:01pm Jan 3rd, 2016

So I submitted Kingdom of Avia and later Bad Luck for a Bad Manager to EQD- got rejected, and they actually gave a legit reason this time! (Though I suspect they didn't read beyond the first chapter for both stories).

I'm probably going to submit all my currently-published stories as time goes on, and get rejected each time- I'm keeping score!

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Nov
20th
2015

(More) Fanfic updates · 8:26pm Nov 20th, 2015

I mentioned in a previous post that I wanted to ask Dr. Wolf if I could use his OC in Dr. Bobtail. Well, I did, but due to a line by Skaydi that I don't want to change (it showcases an important part of her personality), the story is PG-13, so I can't use his OC.

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Jun
17th
2015

Random Announcement of sorts, and some foreshadowing · 1:57pm Jun 17th, 2015

With the way Kingdom of Avia is going, I might write some actual novels with characters whose personalities are based on the AviaVerse characters in all the Avia stories (so I'd also write a novel based on Eighth Sea, as well as the as-yet-unpublished story Kingdoms of Freedom. The novel would have NOTHING to do with MLP (Don't sue me

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