Hey guys, this blog is here so you can post ideas, suggestions, and let me know if there are any mistakes or mess ups

The preview password for my current story, Halo: Fourth Ring, is UNSEAL THE HUSHED CASKET (Yes, it's all caps and there are spaces in between)

Edit: You no longer have to use the preview password, as the story has been published.

I’ve been to NorthPark this week (which, by the way, is HUGE, and has many cool statues/works of art inside), to get Christmas/Hearth’s Warming’s gifts, for the family. I’m asking for a Leader class Optimus Prime toy! Uh, Rainbow, it’s a toy. What do you mean, why would I want a toy that sounds too complicated!? I have toys just like it and they’re VERY complicated! Uh! Never mind... ANYWAYS, let’s continue. I’ve also begun my

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About Me

Name - Elijah R.
Age - 13 years old
Favorite types of toys - Transformers
Favorite movies - Transformers: Revenge of the Fallen, Alien: Covenant
Favorite ponies: All of the Mane 6,Daring Do, Doctor Whooves/Time Turner.

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Your opinion on my story, Halo: Fourth Ring

I would like to know if you want me to continue with Halo: Fourth Ring, and if so, I need ideas, and feedback, too.

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/413486/halo-fourth-ring

NOBLE WOLF

(picture in avatar)

Age: 34 (in human years)
Gender: Female
Species: Pony
Subspecies: Alicorn

Coat, mane, and wing color: Gray with hints of green here and there. A sky blue stripe runs down horizontally along her tail, and her wing armor is sky blue.

Eye Color: Teal.

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https://www.fimfiction.net/story/413486/9/halo-fourth-ring/the-truth-and-reconciliation

So, some of you might be wondering I deleted Halo: Fourth Ring.

Well, that’s because I felt that I didn’t write it well.

The chapters were really short, some only being a 100 words, sometimes less.

I also felt that I didn’t do a good job writing the characters and their personalities.

BUT...

Don’t give up hope!

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Halo

SEPTEMBER 19TH, 2553
UNKNOWN STAR SYSTEM
WARNING - COVENANT CRUISERS IN PURSUIT

It begins with the blackness.

Then, one by one, stars seemingly blink into existence, lighting up a huge infinitely large space.

RUMBLE..... BOOM!

The seemingly peaceful silence is interrupted by a tear opening in the empty void, which widens into a huge hole.

Coasting slowly out of the maw, a Halcyon-class heavy cruiser emerges from slipspace.

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I want to rewrite my story, Halo: Fourth Ring, due to the chapters just being so short, and I feel I've written not very well.

To 'vote', comment on whether you want me to KEEP the original story, or to DISCARD and REWRITE the current one.
This is Master Chief Petty Officer of the Navy Jahbraz-117, signing off.