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Oct
28th
2015

The Opinionated Narrator · 10:04pm Oct 28th, 2015


A Certain Point of View: The Opinionated Narrator


First person, second person, third person, limited, omniscient: that’s all we need to know, isn’t it?

Of course not, and I’m going to kick off with something I mentioned in yesterday’s formal review: the opinionated narrator.

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Oct
5th
2015

One Portion of Conflict, Please! · 11:14am Oct 5th, 2015


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Conflict of Interest: One Portion of Conflict, Please!


Time for a topic shift. I have a plan for a long-form post on Friday, so I’m going to try and cover all the groundwork before that’s ready to be published. The first thing I need to do is talk about what makes a conflict, and just how much can the concept be broken down to its simplest form.

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Oct
7th
2015

Controlling Intensity · 4:07pm Oct 7th, 2015

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Conflict of Interest: Controlling Intensity


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Oct
16th
2015

Agency · 10:47pm Oct 16th, 2015

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Conflict of Interest: Agency


I was thinking that I really needed to talk about this now, but as I considered what was worth saying about it, I realised just how much of a clever – and insufferably smug – bastard I am.

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Oct
2nd
2015

Chicken and Egg · 1:17pm Oct 2nd, 2015

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Sentence Sophistication: Chicken vs Egg


Knowing how to write good prose is one thing, but sometimes it is just as important to make sure that barriers to good prose aren’t of our own making.

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Oct
8th
2015

Interlude · 11:00pm Oct 8th, 2015

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Conflict of Interest: Interlude


Just a quick drive-by post as I’ve been out all day today:

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Oct
12th
2015

Abstracting Conflicts · 1:16pm Oct 12th, 2015

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Conflict of Interest: Abstracting Conflicts


Like all things in writing, there’s knowing the rule, understanding the rule, then knowing when to throw it straight out of the window. As such, I want to focus on when most of what I’ve said about narrative conflict can take a long walk of the proverbial short pier.

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Oct
18th
2015

Narrative Mood · 8:44pm Oct 18th, 2015

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Conflict of Interest: Narrative Mood


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Sep
30th
2015

Active, Passive, or Just Weak? · 1:48pm Sep 30th, 2015

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Sentence Sophistication: Active, Passive, or Just Weak?


One of the roads to tight, streamlined prose is to minimise wording and always use the active voice. Today, I want to talk about a kind of writing that I see an awful lot of authors use, and I’m not just talking the newer ones, that I think needs the gentle caress of a little sophistication.

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Oct
1st
2015

Invisible Ink: Backfilling · 9:34pm Oct 1st, 2015

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Sentence Sophistication: Backfilling


Following on from yesterday, I made a connection so something I was warned about a long time ago: backfilling.

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Oct
31st
2015

First or Third? · 11:05pm Oct 31st, 2015


A Certain Point of View: First or Third?


So, the comments on my last post successfully predicted where I was going next, so let’s just dive right into that (he says, already a day late).

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Oct
27th
2015

Formal Review: On Target · 4:33pm Oct 27th, 2015

Ladies and gents, it's that time again. The Pleasant Commentator and Review Group got about 90 stories submitted this time, and I'll be attempting to tackle one per week – at least until I run out of relatively short ones that fit this format. As always, I will reproduce all such reviews here.

I'm hoping to have a few words on what I call the 'opinionated narrator' up here tomorrow to resume my Invisible Ink posts.

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May
14th
2020

Helping my friend Invisible Davis (Lost loved one) · 8:39pm May 14th, 2020

A while ago, a pretty cool dude called Invisible Davis made some fun videos of the Barcast being dumb. These actually helped us kinda get on the map, and we still use them as examples of what our podcast is like. Hell, his song is still the opening music for all of our podcasts! He didn't ask for money. We didn't ask him to do it. But he did, because he's wonderful.

A few days ago, his mother passed away.

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Feb
25th
2018

Public Sex With an Invisible Stallion? · 4:43am Feb 25th, 2018

Because why the fuck not, that's pretty damn hot.

[Adult story embed hidden]

Give it a read, and feel free to let me know what you think!

May
3rd
2018

Half-Life 2's Invisible Tutorial | Game Maker's Toolkit · 11:39pm May 3rd, 2018

Feb
21st
2024

What links the Deathly Hallows. · 12:54am February 21st

OK, so I was watching a video on fan theories and thought I'd share one of my comments here. One theory is that Harry's Invisibility Cloak was a piece of the Veil... which really makes no sense to my way of thinking. They were also speculating on the connection between the three hallows.

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Apr
26th
2019

On story deletion. · 7:26pm Apr 26th, 2019

I'm in a bad place mentally right now, keep that in mind when reading the following, it may affect the content or tone.

Despite cutting down on my activity in the site's groups, I still end up trawling through the forums from time to time to see what's going on in some of the bigger corners. And idling by one such group which I have contributed to but never was an official part of (I think? Can't say for sure) I came across some debate regarding deletion of stories.

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Jun
3rd
2017

Barcast today with a guy who makes cool videos and hates our guts · 10:44pm Jun 3rd, 2017

Invisible Davis is actually a genuinely pretty cool dude. He hates us. So you know his taste is decent.
Anyway, we're going to be hanging out with him today on the Barcast at 4PM PST, asking him questions and getting a little of our own abuse thrown back at us for a change. Get your drinks ready, you probably won't want to set them down.

See you there shortly!:
https://www.twitch.tv/mikesnipe

-Pencil:heart:

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Jan
15th
2023

Being Hunted By An Invisible Horror | The Hidden VR · 5:27pm Jan 15th, 2023

Oct
23rd
2016

Good HiE Cast: Everybody Hates Otaku · 1:03pm Oct 23rd, 2016

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