So after spending quite a while trying to name a character I wanted in the story and getting nowhere, I decided to just remove her and continue anyway. This story needs to be free dammit! I've started writing up chapter two properly now so expect updates eventually.
Side note. I want to find out names of shades of grey. But I know typing shades of grey into google images won't result in what I want.
This entry contains spoilers for Gray Hat. Be warned...
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I’m not quite satisfied with this chapter, although it’s still in pretty good shape.
This entry contains spoilers for Liquid Courage, and contains sexually suggestive material. Be warned...
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It's 30 minutes before midnight here in Japan, so to reflect on the year before I move on to 2017, I've taken the liberty of quantifying all of the writing I did this year.
Grey Mann himself:Chaotic Neutral.
his character:he was forced go to a comic con because of his best friend birthday
his ideas:Chaotic Neutral. "hey I am a dick but I am a Good guy. but I am bored as hell... so maybe why not try to take over the world or something.
(hey he got a lot of robots and lot of money what else he supposes to do?)"
If you owned WickedBinge, how would you write an MLP: FIM version of Good to Evil in your opinion? This is all just for fun. Also, while this is optional, you don't have to include characters from the comics or any other source material outside of the actual show.
For me, it would be something like this:
The Good: The characters whom we'll work our way down with.
- Princess Cadence (Gold Medal of Good)
- Fluttershy
- Coco Pummel
- Thorax
- Flurry Heart
This covers chapters eight of the book, which equates to eight and nine of Fifty Shades, and I've also provided a bit about Grey, which is Fifty Shades written from Christian Grey's point of view. If you haven't read it and will never read it for any one of a number of excellent reasons, you can hear it from me that it is one of the laziest things I've ever seen. It can't have been for anything other than the money, unless perhaps it's a sort of backhanded attempt at a
I don't really know how my story Twilight Has Grey hair gained another spike in views out of nowhere. Is my story somewhere else for others to see it? Is it in the popular tab right now? I have no idea.
A few of my stories may be undergoing rewrites for the first few of their chapters. I'm hoping to have them all done by next Monday, but that's just wishful thinking. Caravel will be on the top of the priority list as I have just resumed writing for it. Twimelines is also the most likely to have an entire rewrite, but that will take more than a week with my schedule. Equestrian Scavenger and Twilight the Great Grey will be mostly just edited, as to keep the story
I've finally gotten around to it! As much as I love the name Grey, and it's related Greycait (which is an alt of Greycat), it's a name for another site and another face of mine. Finally got around to changing the name to my (hopefully set) ponysona Grey Seeking Dusk (sue me, I like Grey...) Of course, the moment I designed it all that time ago a plethora of stories around the character came up, so who knows, I might write those... Do have a plan with Bluey for one of them...
I mentioned in my previous post that I've been reviewing Fifty Shades of Neigh, which is a parody of Fifty Shades of Grey. The hero, Crispian Neigh, has a dark secret. He's a Brony.
Anyway, the group that's hosting it, Rage Reviews, is marked NSFW, and some people might not be interested in going there or in the full review.